Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Speak more clearly and concisely. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, and keep answers within 2–4 sentences. Use simple linking words (for example, “and”, “also”, “but”, “because”) correctly and correct verb forms (e.g., “I prefer volleyball” not “I usually prefer volleyball game it's from my favorite game”). Also provide a short reason or example to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I have several hobbies, but my main ones are playing cards, online games and volleyball. I prefer volleyball because it keeps me fit and I enjoy playing it with my friends on weekends.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and follow with one or two supporting details. Avoid fillers (“uh”, “and”) and repetitions. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. Give a specific detail (age, who taught you, a memorable event) instead of vague praise statements.

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child I loved playing volleyball and my father taught me the basics. By the age of twelve I played regularly for my neighborhood team and my friends often praised my serving skills.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use present perfect or present simple to show continuity (e.g., “I have had this hobby since childhood” or “I have played volleyball since I was a child”). Keep sentences concise and avoid repeating phrases. Provide one specific current fact to show development (team name, level of play) clearly and correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have played volleyball since I was a child. Now I am a district-level player for a team called King Warriors, and we compete against other schools and universities.

Gợi ý: Use correct subject-verb agreement and clear statements. Start with a topic sentence stating whether your hobbies match your family’s, then give one or two specific supporting details (e.g., how your father influenced you). Avoid unclear phrases like “proper guidance and proper sports he not become a player.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I share the same hobby with my father; he taught me volleyball when I was young. Although he did not play professionally, his guidance inspired me to become a district-level player, which makes me very proud.

× Yes I have hobbies I have many hobbies but I like to say only 2-3 hobbies like playing cards, playing volleyball and also online games.

✓ Yes, I have many hobbies, but I will mention only two or three: playing cards, playing volleyball, and online games.

Run-on sentence and unclear phrasing. Combine clauses with commas and conjunctions, use numbers in words for small counts, and use a colon to introduce a list. This improves clarity and grammatical structure.

× But I but I usually prefer volleyball game it's from my favorite game and sometimes I will free I play the volleyball with my friends.

✓ But I usually prefer volleyball; it is one of my favorite games, and when I have free time I play volleyball with my friends.

Multiple issues: repetition, wrong tense/phrasing ('it's from my favorite game'), and incorrect word order. Use 'prefer' + noun, 'one of my favorite games' for natural phrasing, and 'when I have free time' for correct time expression.

× And yes, I have hobbies when a child, I play the volleyball, I'm the good player of volleyball and the, my father, uh, teach me how to play the volleyball And, uh, in the childhood, in the childhood time, uh, I was the best player of volleyball in the, my society and my old friends are praise me my.

✓ Yes, I had hobbies as a child. I played volleyball and I was a good player. My father taught me how to play volleyball, and during my childhood I was one of the best players in my community; my old friends praised me.

Mixed tenses and incorrect articles/pronouns. Use past tense ('had', 'played', 'taught') when talking about childhood. Replace 'the childhood' with 'during my childhood' and fix pronoun and article misuse. Use 'praised me' for correct verb form.

× Yes, I am a same hobby ill in the my childhood time.

✓ Yes, I have had the same hobby since my childhood.

Incorrect word forms and tense. Use present perfect 'have had' to express a hobby continuing from childhood to now, and correct prepositional phrase 'since my childhood'.

× I have I have the good player of volleyball in my child in the my childhood time and nowadays I'm a district player of volleyball and my team name is King Warriors and I play many match with other schools and many universities.

✓ I was a good volleyball player as a child, and nowadays I'm a district-level volleyball player. My team's name is King Warriors, and I play many matches against other schools and universities.

Repetition and incorrect noun forms ('match' -> 'matches'), awkward phrasing. Use past tense for childhood, 'district-level' for clarity, and plural 'matches' for multiple games.

× Yes, I was same obviously with my family members.

✓ Yes, I had the same hobby as my family members.

Incorrect tense and word choice. Use past/simple phrasing 'had the same hobby as' to indicate shared interest; 'was same' is ungrammatical.

× My father are player of volleyball but proper guidance and proper sports he not become a player but I follow its passion and I become a district player of my society and also I'm the good player of volleyball and I feel very proud for.

✓ My father was a volleyball player, but due to lack of proper guidance and sports facilities he did not become a professional player. I followed my passion and became a district-level player in my community. I am a good volleyball player and I feel very proud.

Multiple pronoun, agreement and tense errors. 'My father are' should be 'My father was' (subject-verb agreement and past tense). 'He not become' should be 'he did not become'. 'Its passion' should be 'my passion' or 'his passion' depending on meaning; here 'I followed my passion' is clearer. Use consistent past tense for past events and correct article and noun phrases.