Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and remove redundancy. For example, explain how swimming helps basketball and state a clear preference.

Ví dụ: Yes. I enjoy both swimming and basketball, but I prefer swimming. In addition, swimming helps me build core strength and improve endurance, which benefits my basketball performance.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence and then one or two clear, specific details. Fix tense and phrasing (e.g., "learned to ride a bicycle"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was seven, I learned to ride a bicycle and it became my hobby. Because it was fun and gave me freedom, I often rode to the nearby complex on weekends.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly. If you have a long-term interest, name it and give a specific supporting detail. Correct grammar ("since childhood", "I don't have a specific hobby", "I looked after pets"). Avoid unclear expressions like "chained my pet"—explain what you did with pets.

Ví dụ: Yes. Since childhood I have loved animals and enjoyed looking after pets. For example, I used to feed and play with my dog every day, which taught me responsibility.

Gợi ý: Begin with a concise topic sentence, then add a specific detail about frequency or a shared memory. Use correct tense and smoother phrasing ("we have" instead of "we too").

Ví dụ: Yes. My family and I share a love of swimming. We usually swim together on weekends, a routine we've kept since I was a child.

× Yes I do, I love swimming but I also enjoy basketball because swimming it's helps a lot to core strengthen of my basketball performance.

✓ Yes, I do. I love swimming, and I also enjoy basketball because swimming helps a lot to strengthen the core for my basketball performance.

The sentence has pronoun misuse 'swimming it's helps' — 'it's' is unnecessary and incorrect. Also 'to core strengthen of my basketball performance' has wrong word order and preposition. Use 'swimming helps' (remove 'it's') and 'to strengthen the core for my basketball performance' or 'strengthen my core for basketball.' Ensure proper subject-verb structure and noun phrase order. Suggestion: Remove redundant pronoun 'it's', use 'helps' as the verb, and reorder to 'strengthen the core for my basketball performance.'

× So yeah I love both but I most likely swimming.

✓ So yeah, I love both, but I most likely prefer swimming.

'Most likely swimming' is not a correct verb phrase. Use a verb like 'prefer' after 'most likely' or say 'I most likely choose swimming' or 'I am more likely to choose swimming.' The error is choice of word/quantifier phrase. Suggestion: use 'prefer' or 'am more likely to choose.'

× Yes, I did when I was seven years old.

✓ Yes, I did when I was seven years old.

This sentence is acceptable on its own for answering 'Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?' It correctly uses past tense 'did.' No change needed. (Note: kept as confirmation; context requires following sentence corrections.)

× I it's my first time learning bicycle, but it's so fun it it become my hobby because I love bicycling to another complex in during the weekend.

✓ It was my first time learning to ride a bicycle, and it was so fun that it became my hobby because I loved riding to another complex during the weekend.

Multiple pronoun and verb-form errors: 'I it's my first time' mixes subject pronouns and contractions incorrectly. Use 'It was my first time learning to ride a bicycle.' Use infinitive 'to ride' after 'learning.' 'it it become' should be 'it became.' 'Bicycling to another complex in during the weekend' has wrong preposition and article: use 'riding to another complex during the weekend.' Also match past tense consistently. Suggestion: Use 'It was my first time learning to ride a bicycle' and keep past tense verbs 'was' and 'became.'

× Yes I do but since I since I childhood I don't have a specifically hobby but I love I love pets.

✓ Yes, I do, but since my childhood I haven't had a specific hobby; I love pets.

Errors: 'since I since I childhood' has repetition and missing possessive 'my.' 'I don't have a specifically hobby' uses wrong tense, wrong article, and 'specifically' should be 'specific.' Use present perfect 'haven't had' for a situation continuing from childhood to now. Also remove duplicate 'I love.' Suggestion: Use 'since my childhood' and 'I haven't had a specific hobby.'

× When I was childhood I chained my pet like.

✓ When I was a child, I changed my pet's name, for example.

'When I was childhood' should be 'When I was a child' or 'in childhood.' 'I chained my pet like' is unclear: likely intended 'I changed my pet's name' or 'I had a pet that I cared for.' 'Chained' may be wrong word; if they meant 'trained' or 'kept on a chain,' clarify. Here corrected to a plausible meaning 'changed my pet's name' with 'for example' to reflect 'like.' Suggestion: Use 'When I was a child' and replace unclear verb 'chained' with intended verb (changed/trained/kept) and add object 'my pet's name' or 'my pet.'

× Yes we do. Swimming is one of our favorite sports in my whole family because we too swim during the weekend since I was a kid and until now.

✓ Yes, we do. Swimming is one of our favorite sports in my whole family because we also swim during the weekends since I was a kid and continue to do so now.

Errors: missing comma after 'Yes'; 'we too swim' should be 'we also swim.' 'During the weekend' is better as 'on weekends' or 'during the weekends.' 'Since I was a kid and until now' mixes tenses; use present perfect continuous sense: 'since I was a kid and continue to do so now.' Also 'whole family' is acceptable but 'my whole family' kept. Suggest using 'on weekends' or 'during the weekends' and 'continue to do so.'