Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ควรตอบให้เป็นประโยคชัดเจน ตรงประเด็น และเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น หลีกเลี่ยงเสียงอืม/การเริ่มต้นด้วยวลีไม่จำเป็น เพิ่มรายละเอียดประกอบ (เช่น ความถี่ ระยะเวลา เหตุผลที่ชอบ) และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค

Ví dụ: I enjoy swimming more than any other hobby. I swim three times a week to stay fit and relax. I especially like swimming in the morning because it helps me start the day energized.

Gợi ý: ควรตอบโดยตรงและเรียงลำดับความคิดให้ชัดเจน หลีกเลี่ยงคำไม่จำเป็น เช่น "And yes" และใช้รูปกริยาที่ถูกต้อง (used to) เพิ่มรายละเอียดเล็กน้อย เช่น ใครไปด้วย ที่ไหน และบอกเหตุผลสั้น ๆ

Ví dụ: Yes. When I was a child I used to ride a bike with my friends around our community. We rode almost every afternoon because it was a fun way to exercise and explore nearby streets.

Gợi ý: คำตอบค่อนข้างดี แต่ควรเริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรงคำถามก่อน (topic sentence) ลดคำฟุ่มเฟือยและแก้คำผิดเล็กน้อย ใช้ linking words ถ้าจะขยายรายละเอียด เช่น 'so' หรือ 'which' เพื่อความลื่นไหล

Ví dụ: Yes, I have had cycling as a hobby since childhood. I used to ride my bike around the neighborhood almost every afternoon, which was a fun way to exercise and explore the area.

Gợi ý: คำตอบมีความหมายไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดเกี่ยวกับไวยากรณ์ คำศัพท์ ('draw' เป็น 'drawn', 'freezing a genuine equation' ไม่สมเหตุสมผล) ควรตอบตรงคำถามว่าเหมือนหรือไม่เหมือนครอบครัว ให้เหตุผลชัดเจน และใช้คำที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'capture moments' แทนวลีสับสน จำกัดไม่เกิน 3 ประโยค

Ví dụ: Not really; my family prefers outdoor sports, but I'm more drawn to photography. I enjoy capturing everyday moments because it helps me notice small details and memories.

× I have to say I'm proud to swim.

✓ I have to say I'm proud of swimming.

The original uses the base verb 'swim' after 'proud to', which is unnatural here. Use 'proud of' + present participle (gerund) or 'proud to' + base verb with an appropriate complement. 'Proud of swimming' correctly uses the gerund to describe the activity. Suggestion: use 'I'm proud of swimming' or 'I'm proud to be a swimmer.'

× Swimming more than anything else.

✓ I enjoy swimming more than anything else.

This fragment lacks a finite verb and subject. To be a complete sentence, include a subject and verb. 'I enjoy swimming more than anything else' completes the thought and fits the context.

× When I was shy, I would like to ride a bike with my friend in our community.

✓ When I was a child, I would like to ride my bike with my friends in our community.

The phrase 'When I was shy' is likely incorrect contextually; 'When I was a child' fits the question. Also 'would like' is present conditional; for habitual past action, use 'would ride' or 'used to ride'. 'Friend' should be plural if 'with my friends'. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child, I used to ride my bike with my friends in our community.'

× And yes.

✓ Yes.

'And yes' is a fragment and awkward. A simple 'Yes.' appropriately answers follow-up questions. Use concise responses in speech tests.

× When I was a child, I used to ride up my bike around our neighborhood with my friends almost every afternoon because it was a fun way to exercise and explore the area.

✓ When I was a child, I used to ride my bike around our neighborhood with my friends almost every afternoon because it was a fun way to exercise and explore the area.

The phrase 'ride up my bike' is incorrect; the verb 'ride' is followed directly by the object 'my bike'. Remove 'up'. 'Used to' correctly indicates past habitual action.

× I had to say I'm draw to photography more than most of my family.

✓ I have to say I'm drawn to photography more than most of my family.

'Had to say' is past; the prompt likely requires present 'have to say'. 'I'm draw to' uses base verb; correct adjective is 'drawn to' (past participle used adjectivally). Use 'I have to say I'm drawn to photography...'.

× I find it really satisfying to capture little everyday moments because there's something about freezing a genuine equation that I love my brain on the other.

✓ I find it really satisfying to capture little everyday moments because there's something about freezing a genuine emotion that I love about it.

Several issues: 'freezing a genuine equation' is incorrect word choice; likely 'emotion'. 'I love my brain on the other' is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace with 'I love about it' or 'I love how it makes me feel.' Use clear noun and correct prepositional phrase. Suggestion: '...because there's something about freezing a genuine emotion that I love.'