Hobby— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), correct grammar (tenses, articles), and link ideas with connectors. Give one or two specific details (how often you play, what you read) within 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I have two main hobbies: playing badminton and reading. I play badminton with friends most weekends to keep fit and relieve stress, and I usually read novels and articles in the evenings to relax and improve my vocabulary.

Gợi ý: Use past tense for childhood, organise into complete sentences and use linking words. Be specific about frequency or examples and correct word choice (e.g., 'taught me patience and geography', not 'through me').

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed collecting stamps and drawing cartoons as a child. Collecting stamps taught me patience and helped me learn about different countries, while drawing cartoons allowed me to express my emotions and relax after school.

Gợi ý: Clarify which hobby you mean and use coherent sentences. Avoid fragmented phrases and irrelevant words. Use past and present correctly, give a clear example and explain benefit concisely.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have loved drawing since childhood. I would draw animals and garden scenes to relax and to express my imagination. For example, I joined an after‑school art club, which improved my attention to detail and creativity.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, grammatical response. State whether you share hobbies, name the shared hobby, and give one specific example of how you share it (e.g., cooking together, exchanging recipes). Avoid unclear fragments and wrong words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I share some hobbies with my family, especially cooking. We often cook together on weekends and exchange recipes and recommendations, which helps us bond and try new dishes.

× Playing badminton helped me to uh stay fit and shut my mind.

✓ Playing badminton helps me to stay fit and shut my mind.

The context is habitual present (current hobbies), so use present simple 'helps' not past 'helped'. Also 'to uh' filler removed and infinitive 'to stay' is correct; 'shut my mind' is informal but accepted. Suggest using 'clear my mind' for clarity.

× I always play but maintain in the weekend with my friends while reading help me to relax and stay focus and help to improve my vocabulary.

✓ I always play badminton with my friends at the weekend, while reading helps me to relax, stay focused, and improve my vocabulary.

Multiple issues: coordinate clauses need proper conjunctions and punctuation. 'maintain' is incorrect here; likely 'meet' or 'play'. Use 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends'. Subject-verb agreement for 'reading helps' required and parallel structure 'relax, stay focused, and improve' needed.

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child? Student: Yes, I do enjoy collecting stamps and drawing cartoons.

✓ Yes, I enjoyed collecting stamps and drawing cartoons when I was a child.

The question asks about the past (childhood), so the answer should use past tense 'enjoyed' to match. Using 'do enjoy' implies present, which is inconsistent with the question's timeframe.

× Collecting stamps through me, patient and geographical as I learn about different countries while driving.

✓ Collecting stamps made me patient and interested in geography because I learned about different countries while studying them.

'Through me' is incorrect; use 'made me'. 'Geographical' is adjective; use 'interested in geography'. 'While driving' is likely wrong context; clarified to 'while studying them' or 'while learning' to make sense.

× Help me express emotions and relax after school.

✓ It helped me express emotions and relax after school.

Standalone fragment lacks subject; combine with previous sentence or add subject 'It' and past tense 'helped' to match past context.

× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood? Student: Yes, I have enjoyed driving since my childhood.

✓ Yes, I have enjoyed driving since childhood.

Small wording: 'since childhood' is idiomatic. Present perfect 'have enjoyed' is fine to show continuing hobby; remove unnecessary 'my'.

× I use. Let's just catch animal and gardens for our. Relax and express my imagination.

✓ I used to sketch animals and gardens to relax and express my imagination.

Original is fragmented and unclear. 'Used to sketch' expresses habitual past; 'to relax and express my imagination' provides purpose. Ensure verb phrase is complete.

× For example, I joined an after school.

✓ For example, I joined an after-school club.

'After school' needs a noun like 'club' to complete the idea; hyphenate 'after-school' when used as adjective.

× And this obvious also improved my attention to detail and creativity.

✓ And this obviously also improved my attention to detail and creativity.

Use adverb 'obviously' not adjective 'obvious' to modify the verb 'improved'.

× I share some hobby with my family, particular cooking.

✓ I share some hobbies with my family, particularly cooking.

Agree nouns: 'hobby' -> 'hobbies'. Use adverb 'particularly' to modify and plural 'some hobbies'.

× Which one was born at Exchange recipe on movie recommendations, however.

✓ We often exchange recipes and recommend movies to each other, however.

Original fragment is ungrammatical. Provide full clause with subject 'We' and verbs 'exchange' and 'recommend' in present simple for habitual action.

× I'll be there that they do not bless.

✓ I mean that they do not always agree on everything.

Original is unclear and ungrammatical. Replace with clear expression 'do not always agree on everything' to convey intended meaning.

× So there is a healthy mix of sheer.

✓ So there is a healthy mix of shared and different hobbies.

'Sheer' is incorrect word choice. Use 'shared and different hobbies' to summarize family hobby variety and complete the sentence.