Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you have any hobbies?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have my hobbies playing the piano because playing the piano is very fun.
Giám khảo
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, well I am child like painting.
Giám khảo
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have.
Giám khảo
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Thí sinh
No, my family doesn't have some hobbits because there doesn't like.
Do you have any hobbies?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接并且自然。先给出简洁的主句说明你有钢琴爱好,然后用一两句具体细节支撑理由,避免重复(例如不要连续说“playing the piano”两次相同表达)。可用连接词(because, because of, as, since)连接原因,并增加具体细节如练习频率或感受。保持不超过五句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I play the piano in my free time. I find it fun and relaxing because it lets me express emotions through music. I usually practice for about an hour most evenings, which helps me improve steadily.
Did you have any hobbies when you were a child?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 句子时态和表达不准确。应使用过去时说明儿时爱好,先简洁回答,然后给出具体细节(例如你画什么、多久一次、为什么喜欢)。使用衔接词(when I was a child, I used to)使表述自然。避免语法错误如“I am child”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to enjoy painting when I was a child. I often painted animals and landscapes with watercolours because I loved mixing colours and creating scenes. I painted almost every weekend with my parents' support.
Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且缺乏细节。应先直接回答,然后补充说明是哪项从小坚持的爱好、如何坚持以及它对你的影响。使用连接词如“since”或“ever since”来衔接时间信息,并保持1–3句的支持细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I've played the piano since I was seven. Ever since then, I have practised regularly and it has helped me develop discipline and a deeper love for music.
Do you have the same hobbies as your family members?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 表达不清且有语法拼写错误(hobbits → hobbies)。要先直接回答(Yes/No),然后说明原因并举例。使用连接词如"because"或"but"来解释差异,并给出家庭成员的具体爱好做对比。保持句子简洁且语法正确。
Ví dụ: No, my family members have different interests from me. For example, my parents enjoy gardening and cooking, while I prefer playing the piano, so we each have our own hobbies.
× Yes, I have my hobbies playing the piano because playing the piano is very fun.
✓ Yes, I have a hobby: playing the piano, because playing the piano is a lot of fun.
句子中有几处问题:1) 名词短语“my hobbies playing the piano”结构不清晰,应该用“a hobby: playing the piano”或“hobbies, such as playing the piano”。2) 形容词“fun”前若表示程度常用短语“a lot of fun”。总体建议:将名词与-ing 短语清晰连接,使用冠词并调整表达更自然。具体建议:使用“a hobby: playing the piano”或“my hobby is playing the piano”。
× Yes, well I am child like painting.
✓ Yes. When I was a child, I liked painting.
该句存在多处句子结构与时态错误:1) 原句用现在时“am child”错误表示过去;应使用过去时“was a child”或从句“when I was a child”。2) 人称与动词搭配应为“I liked painting”而不是“like painting”或“like painting”与时态不匹配。3) 缺少冠词“a”——“a child”。建议将时间状语放在句首并使用过去时:"When I was a child, I liked painting."
× No, my family doesn't have some hobbits because there doesn't like.
✓ No. My family members don't have the same hobbies because they don't like them.
句子错误类型包括:1) 单复数与主谓一致:"my family"语境中应使用复数意义的“family members”或把动词改为第三人称单数,但后半句使用复数代词更合适。2) 单词拼写错误“hobbits”应为“hobbies”。3) 代词与动词结构错误:“there doesn't like”完全不符合英语语法,应该用主语+动词结构,例如“they don't like them”。4) 建议使用“the same hobbies”和复数代词,完整句子为:"My family members don't have the same hobbies because they don't like them."
× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood? Student: Yes, I have.
✓ Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood? Student: Yes, I do.
此处为固定疑问句的回答,使用助动词“do/does”进行简短回答。原句中使用“I have”也能被理解,但在习惯用法中应答“Yes, I do.” 因此建议用与疑问句匹配的简短回答形式以更自然地回应。