Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "especially"). Correct singular/plural and article errors ("a good suggestion" or "good suggestions").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially in person, because it helps me stay connected. For example, when I’m stressed about school, I often talk with a close friend who gives practical advice and emotional support.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent and specific. Use a clear topic sentence and link supporting points with words like "usually" or "for example." Avoid awkward phrasing ("a lot so much"). Mention 1–3 concrete topics with brief examples.

Ví dụ: Usually we update each other about our lives. For example, we talk about current hobbies, the latest movies we like, and fashion trends we’ve noticed on social media.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear reason and specific example. Use linking words like "because" and correct noun forms ("personal stories", "suggestions"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences and avoid vague phrases like "in the space chat."

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it’s easier to discuss personal matters. For instance, I can share problems and get focused advice from a close friend without others interrupting.

Gợi ý: Use a concise topic sentence and correct word choice ("shutting applications" unclear—say "messaging apps"). Give a specific reason and an example; avoid grammar mistakes ("more easily").

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and tone of voice. For example, when discussing a sensitive issue, seeing someone’s reaction helps me respond appropriately.

Gợi ý: This is a good concise answer—improve by adding a brief reason or example. Use natural phrasing ("I prefer spending time with friends"). Keep it to two sentences and avoid tense/wording issues.

Ví dụ: No, I rarely argue with friends because we usually resolve disagreements calmly. The last disagreement was years ago when we had different plans, and we quickly talked it through and moved on.

× Yes, I like chatting with friends especially chatting verbally because I think it is a great time to connect with my friends especially my friends in high school.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends, especially talking in person, because I think it is a great way to connect with my friends, especially those from high school.

The original used 'chatting verbally' which is awkward; 'talking in person' or 'chatting in person' is clearer. Also 'a great time to connect' is more natural as 'a great way to connect.' Use of 'especially my friends in high school' needs 'those from' to refer clearly. Suggestion: choose natural gerund phrases ('talking in person', 'chatting online') and use parallel structure.

× And sometimes I love to talk to my friends because I have some problems in my life.

✓ Sometimes I like to talk to my friends when I have problems in my life.

Starting with 'And' is unnecessary and the phrasing 'I have some problems in my life' is wordy. Use a concise clause 'when I have problems.' This fixes redundancy and improves sentence flow.

× So I like someone to talk to my problems and I always get a good suggestions from my.

✓ So I like someone to talk to about my problems, and I always get good suggestions from them.

Missing preposition 'about' after 'talk to' is needed. 'A good suggestions' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'good suggestions' or 'a good suggestion.' 'From my' is incomplete; use 'from them' or 'from my friends.' Suggestion: ensure correct prepositions and pronouns and agreement between articles and nouns.

× To be honest, I haven't talked to my friends a lot so much during this time, but if I have time to chat with my friends, we will update our life and what we really into it right now or the trends or the fashion about the movies that we really love.

✓ To be honest, I haven't talked to my friends much recently, but if I have time to chat with them, we update each other on our lives, what we are into right now, trends, and the movies and fashions we like.

Use 'haven't talked... much recently' instead of 'a lot so much during this time.' 'We will update our life' is awkward; use 'we update each other on our lives.' 'What we really into it' needs correct verb: 'what we are into.' Streamline list items and use consistent verb forms. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and present continuous for current interests.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because in the space chat we can talk in any stories that we really want.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because in a private chat we can talk about any stories we want.

'The space chat' is unclear; 'a private chat' is better. 'Talk in any stories' should be 'talk about any stories.' Use appropriate nouns for context and correct preposition 'about.'

× It could be a personal stories and any some suggestions from my friend.

✓ It could be personal stories and suggestions from my friend.

'A personal stories' mixes singular article with plural noun; remove 'a.' 'Any some suggestions' is redundant and ungrammatical; choose 'suggestions.' 'From my friend' is okay but could be plural if referring to one-on-one chat. Suggestion: ensure noun-article agreement and avoid redundant determiners.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because we can see that person's reaction clearly.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can see the person's reaction clearly.

Use definite article 'the' before 'person's reaction' when referring to the person being talked to. 'That' is unnecessary and slightly incorrect here. Suggestion: use 'the' for a specific but previously implied noun.

× Sometimes communicating via shutting applications we could not see the actual feeling of the speaker.

✓ Sometimes when communicating via chatting applications, we cannot see the speaker's actual feelings.

'Shutting applications' is incorrect; likely 'chatting applications' or 'chat apps.' Missing comma and connector 'when' improves sentence. Use 'cannot' rather than 'could not' for general truth. Use possessive 'speaker's' and plural 'feelings' for natural phrasing.

× So I think face to face communication can help us understand listener more easier.

✓ So I think face-to-face communication can help us understand the listener more easily.

Adverb 'easily' is correct form; 'more easier' is redundant ('more' + comparative). 'Face-to-face' is hyphenated as a compound adjective. Add 'the' before 'listener' if referring to a specific person. Suggestion: use correct adverb forms and avoid double comparatives.

× The last time I argued with friends was many years ago, so I would love to spend a good time with friends rather than to argue with them.

✓ The last time I argued with friends was many years ago, so I would rather spend a good time with friends than argue with them.

Use 'would rather' + base verb, not 'would love to' + infinitive when contrasting preferences. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'rather' and after 'than.' Suggestion: use correct comparative preference structure 'would rather X than Y.'