Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and add a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition and keep within 1–3 sentences. For example, begin with a clear topic sentence then add a specific detail.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually chat with friends during school breaks because it helps us relax after lessons and recharge before the next class.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence and avoid repeating phrases like 'summer break' twice. Use a linking word to give one specific example of an activity to make the answer more vivid.

Ví dụ: We mainly talk about what we did over the summer; for example, I told them about a hiking trip I took, and we exchanged memories and photos from that day.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer, grammatical topic sentence and shorten long clauses. Replace unclear token 'A1' and avoid redundancy. Provide one concise reason and an example to support your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer talking to one close friend because they are more likely to understand me; for instance, my best friend congratulates me sincerely when I share good news.

Gợi ý: Choose one clear preference and explain briefly with a linking word. Avoid contradicting yourself (saying face-to-face is emotional then claiming preference for social media) without clarifying. Be concise and give a specific example of a convenient situation for social media.

Ví dụ: I prefer social media for everyday contact because it is convenient and instant; for example, I can quickly message a classmate about homework from home without arranging a meeting.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer and give one clear reason using a linking word. Avoid vague expressions like 'makes the ideas feel more seen'; use more natural phrasing and a brief example of a constructive argument.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends because it helps us test our ideas and learn from each other; for example, we once disagreed about a school project and ended up improving our plan after discussing different viewpoints.

× I usually chat with my friends at school on the breaks because it makes us relaxed after the lessons.

✓ I usually chat with my friends at school during the breaks because it makes us feel relaxed after lessons.

Use of 'on the breaks' is incorrect preposition — 'during the breaks' or 'at break' is natural (preposition error, ID 11). Also 'makes us relaxed' is unnatural adjective use; use 'makes us feel relaxed' or 'relaxes us' (adjective/adverb issue, ID 13). The correction keeps present simple tense to match habitual action.

× Since the summer break is over, during the breaks we talk about what activities we did in the summer break and we share our memories with each other and we chat about them.

✓ Since the summer break is over, during the breaks we talk about the activities we did over the summer and share our memories with each other.

Avoid repetition and improve preposition use: 'in the summer break' should be 'over the summer' or 'during the summer' (preposition error, ID 11). Also redundant phrases 'we share... and we chat about them' can be simplified. Present tense 'talk' is correct for habitual actions.

× Even though chatting with the group sounds more fun, I prefer chatting with only A1 close friend because I don't believe that everybody feels happy for you when you share a good memory with them and it is really important to find a one good person that can cheer you up.

✓ Even though chatting with a group sounds more fun, I prefer chatting with only one close friend because I don't believe that everybody is happy for you when you share a good memory, and it is really important to find one good person who can cheer you up.

Use 'a group' not 'the group' (article issue, ID 22). 'A1' appears to be a typo; replace with 'one'. 'One good person' should not have the article 'a' before 'one' (article/word order issue, IDs 22 and 18). Use 'is happy for you' instead of 'feels happy for you' for natural phrasing (adjective use, ID 13). Use 'who' for people instead of 'that' (pronoun use, ID 12). Kept present tense preference form.

× Of course, face to face feels more emotional. There is. I prefer social media because it helps us communicate when we are at our homes and it just takes one second to open up the chat and talk with them. So you can chat with them everywhere. You don't have to go meet them.

✓ Of course, face-to-face communication feels more emotional, but I prefer social media because it helps us communicate when we are at home and it only takes a second to open the chat and talk to friends, so you can message them from anywhere and you don't have to meet them in person.

'There is.' is a fragment and should be removed (sentence without a verb/structure error, IDs 23 and 26). Use hyphenated 'face-to-face' as adjective (punctuation/style). 'At our homes' is unnatural; use 'at home' (preposition/article, ID 11/22). 'One second' better as 'a second' and 'open up the chat' to 'open the chat' (article and adverb use, IDs 22 and 20). Use 'talk to friends' or 'message them' rather than 'talk with them' for social media context (preposition/pronoun use, ID 11/12). Consolidated sentences for clarity.

× I do argue with friends. It is important to share our ideas with our close friends because it makes the ideas feel more seen and it is really essential to share the way we think with other people so that we can learn the way they think.

✓ I do argue with friends. It is important to share our ideas with close friends because it makes our ideas feel acknowledged, and it is essential to share how we think with other people so that we can learn how they think.

'Our close friends' can be simplified to 'close friends' (article optional). 'Makes the ideas feel more seen' is informal and ungrammatical; 'makes our ideas feel acknowledged' is clearer (adjective/adverb and noun choice, ID 13). Use 'share how we think' rather than 'share the way we think' for natural phrasing (word choice). Present tense is appropriate for general truths.