Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like chatting with friends?

Thí sinh

I often chat with my friends, usually online in the evenings. We like to catch up about work and share funny stories, which helps me relax after a long day.

Giám khảo

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Thí sinh

I usually chat with my friends about my boyfriend because I'm often angry with him and I complain about things he does and my friends gets annoyed sometimes because I talk about him a lot.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Thí sinh

I prefer chatting with just one friends because conversations feel more personal and relaxed. For example, when we talk one-on-one, I can share my thoughts freely and we can discuss things.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Thí sinh

Of course, I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because it feels more natural and I can read their facial expression and tone of voice. I don't like acting on social media site is headed to understand emotions.

Giám khảo

Do you argue with friends?

Thí sinh

No, I am afraid very love together.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Điểm: 88.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời tự nhiên, rõ ràng và phù hợp; tuy nhiên có thể thêm một câu về tần suất hoặc ví dụ cụ thể để phong phú nội dung. Tránh câu quá dài bằng cách chia thành 2-3 câu ngắn, sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually chat with my friends online in the evenings about our day. For example, last night we talked about a funny incident at work, which made me laugh and helped me unwind.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: Nội dung hơi tiêu cực và lặp lại; cấu trúc câu có lỗi ngữ pháp (subject-verb agreement) và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy cân bằng, nêu lý do tại sao bạn chia sẻ về bạn trai, kèm ví dụ cụ thể và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

Ví dụ: I often talk about my boyfriend, especially when we're frustrated about small misunderstandings. For instance, I told my friends last week about an argument we had over plans, and they offered advice. Sometimes they get annoyed when I mention him too often, so I try to talk about other topics too.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: Ý rõ ràng và có ví dụ, nhưng có lỗi nhỏ về danh từ số nhiều ("one friends") và có thể dùng từ nối để mạch lạc hơn. Thêm một so sánh ngắn giữa hai lựa chọn sẽ làm câu mạnh hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because conversations feel more personal and relaxed. When we talk one-on-one, I can share my thoughts freely, whereas group chats can be noisy and less deep.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Ý tốt nhưng câu cuối bị lủng củng, ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác ("acting on social media site is headed to understand emotions"). Cần diễn đạt rõ nguyên nhân và sửa lỗi. Dùng 2 câu: lý do chính + ví dụ/so sánh ngắn.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more natural and I can read facial expressions and tone of voice. I find it hard to understand emotions on social media, where messages can be misunderstood.

Do you argue with friends?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không rõ nghĩa, ngữ pháp và từ vựng không đúng. Cần trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No), giải thích ngắn gọn lý do và đưa ví dụ nếu cần. Giữ 1-2 câu rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

Ví dụ: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we respect each other's opinions and try to resolve disagreements calmly. For example, if we disagree about plans, we usually compromise and find a solution.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I usually chat with my friends about my boyfriend because I'm often angry with him and I complain about things he does and my friends gets annoyed sometimes because I talk about him a lot.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my boyfriend because I'm often angry with him and I complain about things he does, and my friends get annoyed sometimes because I talk about him a lot.

The verb must agree with its subject: 'friends' is plural so the verb should be 'get', not 'gets'. Suggestion: identify the subject (friends) and use the plural verb form 'get'.

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer chatting with just one friends because conversations feel more personal and relaxed.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend because conversations feel more personal and relaxed.

Use singular 'friend' with 'one'. 'One' requires a singular noun. Suggestion: when a number or 'one' precedes a noun, change the noun to its singular form.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because it feels more natural and I can read their facial expression and tone of voice.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because it feels more natural and I can read their facial expressions and tone of voice.

'Facial expression' should be plural 'facial expressions' to match plural 'friends' or to refer to multiple expressions. Suggestion: ensure noun number matches context; use plural when referring to more than one person's expressions.

Sentence structure errors

× I don't like acting on social media site is headed to understand emotions.

✓ I don't like acting on social media because it makes it hard to understand emotions.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Acting on social media site is headed to understand emotions' has wrong word order and wrong verbs. Suggestion: simplify and use clear clause: 'because it makes it hard to understand emotions' conveys intended meaning.

Sentence structure errors

× No, I am afraid very love together.

✓ No, I'm afraid we don't get along very well.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and words are misordered. Likely intended meaning is that the student and the friend(s) do not argue but instead 'are afraid' or 'don't get along'—context unclear; given question 'Do you argue with friends?' a natural answer is 'No, we don't argue; we get along well.' Suggestion: choose a clear, complete sentence with correct subject, verb, and object: 'I'm afraid we don't get along very well' or 'No, we don't argue; we get along well.'

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Afraid— Frightened; Reluctant
Angry— Irate; Heated; Lose one's temper
Funny— Amusing; Strange; Suspicious
Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
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