Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with friends. Every day I meet friends at my university and talk with friends between classes.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat about delicious food I eat recently. For example, I talked about the shop near university.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people, I often missed the timing of sad speaking, so I like.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer communicate face to face because I like to see official expressions. It's difficult to predict the feelings through the boy stone or only birds.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Is I sometimes argue with friends and the topic is about social problem and. Politics.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で内容は理解できるが、表現が単調で繰り返しがある。トピック文の後に具体的な頻度や理由を簡潔に加えるとより自然で効果的になる。例えば“every day” の代わりに頻度のバリエーションを示し、“between classes” を詳しく説明すると良い。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually catch up with them between classes most weekdays because it helps us relax and share news quickly.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 内容は具体的だが文法と語順に誤りがある(時制と冠詞)。話題の説明を少し広げ、理由やおすすめ点を付け加えると良い。接続詞で流れを作るとさらに自然になる。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about food I've tried recently. For example, I recently recommended a small shop near the university because their noodles are cheap and very tasty.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 意図は分かるが英語表現が不自然で意味が曖昧(“missed the timing of sad speaking”など)。理由を明確に、簡潔な文で表現すること。接続詞を使い、不要な語を省くと良い。
Ví dụ: I prefer talking one-on-one because it's easier to follow the conversation and share personal thoughts, whereas group chats can be noisy and I might miss chances to speak.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 多くの語彙ミスと不明瞭な比喩(“boy stone”や“only birds”)がある。伝えたいポイントは非言語表現が分かるから対面が良いということなので、それを明確かつ自然な語彙で表現する練習をすること。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and body language, which makes it easier to understand how someone really feels than through social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 文法ミス(“Is I”)、句読点と語順の問題、話題の列挙が途切れている。頻度と理由を明確に述べ、接続語で話をつなげると良い。語彙は“social issues”や“politics”を使う。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about social issues and politics, usually when we have different opinions about current events or government decisions.
× Yes, I like chatting with friends. Every day I meet friends at my university and talk with friends between classes.
✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends. Every day I meet my friends at university and talk with them between classes.
Subject uses general habitual present so present tense is fine; errors are pronoun and article usage. Use 'my friends' instead of repeating 'friends' and 'university' without article when referring to the institution in general; replace repeated noun with pronoun 'them' for naturalness. Improve by using possessive or pronoun to avoid repetition.
× I usually chat about delicious food I eat recently. For example, I talked about the shop near university.
✓ I usually chat about delicious food I have eaten recently. For example, I talked about a shop near the university.
The adverb 'recently' requires present perfect ('have eaten') for connection to the present. 'Shop' needs an article: 'a shop' for one unspecified shop and 'the university' when referring to a specific institution known to the listener. Use present perfect for recent experiences and correct articles.
× I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people, I often missed the timing of sad speaking, so I like.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because when I chat with a group of people, I often miss the timing to speak about sensitive topics, so I prefer one-on-one conversations.
Tense consistency requires present simple 'miss' not past 'missed' for habitual action. 'Timing of sad speaking' is unnatural; replace with 'timing to speak about sensitive topics'. Also maintain parallel structure and clarity: end with 'I prefer one-on-one conversations.' Improve by keeping present tense for habits and using natural phrasing.
× I prefer communicate face to face because I like to see official expressions. It's difficult to predict the feelings through the boy stone or only birds.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I like to see facial expressions. It's difficult to predict feelings through a screen or only by text.
Missing 'to' after 'prefer' is a structure error; use 'to communicate'. 'Official expressions' is incorrect word choice—should be 'facial expressions'. 'Boy stone or only birds' is unintelligible; likely intended 'screen' and 'text' or 'messages'. Replace with 'a screen or only by text' for clarity.
× Is I sometimes argue with friends and the topic is about social problem and. Politics.
✓ Sometimes I argue with friends and the topics are about social problems and politics.
Sentence begins incorrectly with 'Is I'—correct subject first: 'Sometimes I'. Use plural 'topics' and plural noun 'social problems'. Remove stray period before 'Politics'. Maintain subject-verb agreement: 'topics are'. Use clear punctuation and word order.