Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends because I think it's very happy and make me relaxed. I think chatting with my friend can aid aid me friendship.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually checked with my friends. Sometimes we checked in the park or a cafe. In the cafe we can check the some study or some knowledge. In the park we can check the movies or books.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to checked with only friend, I think is very quiet and we can take my friendship and we can talk or check the like common habit or common movies or favorite color or favorite dress or T-shirts.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate, uh, face to face because I think it's very, uh, it's very, uh, it's very good. I think, uh, face to face, I can say, say his eyes, I think it's very.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, sometimes I can argue with my friend, umm some uh, if we traveling, I can argue with my friend some how how to how to go or umm, we are live there where where to live or.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 注意语法和用词:将形容词和副词搭配正确(例如 'make me relaxed' 改为 'helps me relax'),避免重复(如 'aid aid')并保持句子简洁。开头应直接回答并给出原因,然后用1-2个支持细节。练习使用自然表达如 'I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and strengthens our friendship.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and strengthens our friendship. For example, after a stressful day at university, a short conversation about our day makes me feel better.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 注意动词时态和词汇选择:不要用 'checked' 描述聊天,应该用 'meet' 或 'chat'. 回答时先说主要内容,再用具体例子支持。避免重复 'some',具体说明话题如 'study plans, movies, or books' 并用连接词如 'for example'。
Ví dụ: I usually chat about things like study plans, movies, and books. For example, when we meet at a cafe we often discuss our coursework, while in the park we talk about recent films or books we've enjoyed.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 表达要直接并逻辑清晰:先给出偏好(group or one-on-one),然后解释原因并举例。使用自然短语如 'one-on-one'、'it's quieter'、'we can talk about personal things'。避免列举过多无关细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it's quieter and more personal. For example, in a one-on-one conversation I can talk about our habits, favourite movies, or clothing preferences without interruptions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 减少口头语停顿(uh, um)并用完整表达说明理由。先直接回答,然后给出清晰原因,如能看到对方表情和眼神更容易理解情感。避免重复和不完整句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating face-to-face because you can see the other person's expressions and eye contact, which helps avoid misunderstandings. For instance, when discussing something important, it's easier to judge their feelings in person.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并使用连贯的理由:先说 'Yes, sometimes',然后说明典型原因并用连接词如 'for example' 或 'usually because'。避免大量重复和语音停顿,尽量把句子控制在3-4句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes we argue, usually about practical matters like travel plans or where to stay. For example, when planning a trip, we might disagree about which route to take or which hotel is best.
× I like chatting with my friends because I think it's very happy and make me relaxed.
✓ I like chatting with my friends because I think it makes me very happy and relaxed.
句中“it's very happy and make me relaxed” 用法不当。“happy”是形容人的感受,不能直接用“it is happy”来表示“这让我高兴”。应使用动词短语“makes me happy”来表达使役关系。另外,“make me relaxed”需与主语单数第三人称一致,改为“makes me relaxed”。将副词“very”放在形容词前修饰“happy”和“relaxed”。建议多练习使役动词结构“make + 人 + 形容词”。
× I think chatting with my friend can aid aid me friendship.
✓ I think chatting with my friend can aid my friendship.
原句中有双重错误:重复了“aid”,且短语“aid me friendship”主语与宾语搭配错误。动词“aid”后接名词或代词宾语,应为“aid my friendship”或“aid me”但“aid my friendship”更符合语境。注意主谓与宾语的正确搭配,避免重复单词。
× Yes, I usually checked with my friends.
✓ Yes, I usually chat with my friends.
问题在于时态。回答描述经常发生的事情,应使用一般现在时“usually chat”,而不是过去式“checked”。此外“check”意义不符,应该用“chat”。建议区分现在时和过去时的用法,表示习惯性动作用一般现在时。
× Sometimes we checked in the park or a cafe.
✓ Sometimes we meet in the park or at a cafe.
原句中动词“checked”用错,且介词搭配不当。表示“在公园或咖啡馆见面”应使用动词“meet”,并与地点搭配“in the park”或“at a cafe”。注意动词与介词的固定搭配。
× In the cafe we can check the some study or some knowledge.
✓ In the cafe we can discuss some studies or share knowledge.
原句中“check the some study or some knowledge”结构混乱,动词“check”与名词搭配不当,且冠词使用错误。应使用“discuss”或“share”来表达“讨论学习或分享知识”,并用“some studies”或“knowledge”。建议学习动词搭配和名词的可数/不可数用法。
× In the park we can check the movies or books.
✓ In the park we can talk about movies or books.
“check”在此用法不恰当,通常用“talk about”来表示“谈论电影或书”。同时“the movies or books”不需要定冠词,除非指特定的作品。建议记忆常见动词短语如“talk about”。
× I prefer to checked with only friend, I think is very quiet and we can take my friendship and we can talk or check the like common habit or common movies or favorite color or favorite dress or T-shirts.
✓ I prefer to meet with only one friend. I think it is very quiet, and we can strengthen our friendship and talk about common habits, movies, favorite colors, clothes or T-shirts.
原句有多处语法问题:动词时态应为不定式或一般现在“prefer to meet”,不能使用过去式“checked”。“only friend”缺少冠词或数词,应为“only one friend”。“I think is very quiet”缺主语,须为“I think it is very quiet”。“take my friendship”表达不当,应为“strengthen our friendship”。并列内容须用恰当的名词复数形式和并列结构。建议分句表达并注意主语、时态和名词形式。
× I prefer to communicate, uh, face to face because I think it's very, uh, it's very, uh, it's very good.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it's very good.
句中重复冗余“it's very”多次且口语填充词“uh”影响书面表达。时态无问题,但应简洁表达。建议练习简洁回答,减少填充词,口语中可适度使用但书写时省略。
× I think, uh, face to face, I can say, say his eyes, I think it's very.
✓ I think, face to face, I can look into his eyes; I think that's important.
原句代词和句子结构混乱。“say his eyes”不合语法,应为“look into his eyes”或“see his eyes/ facial expressions”。句尾“I think it's very”不完整,需要补充形容词如“important”。建议学习常用表达“look into someone’s eyes / see someone’s facial expressions”。
× Yes, sometimes I can argue with my friend, umm some uh, if we traveling, I can argue with my friend some how how to how to go or umm, we are live there where where to live or.
✓ Yes, sometimes I argue with my friend. For example, when we travel, we may argue about how to go somewhere or where to live.
原句中“can argue”可用但不自然,改为一般现在时“I argue”更合适表示习惯性行为;“if we traveling”时态错误,应为“when we travel”或“if we are traveling”。“some how how to how to go”重复且词序错误,改为“how to go somewhere”。“we are live there where where to live”语序和动词形式错误,应为“where to live”。建议理清条件状语从句结构,正确使用时态和固定短语如“argue about”。