Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, I have a soft spot for chatting with my friends because talking with them helps me relieve my daily stress and unwind. For example, I often catch up with my best friend about everything from small jokes to several problems, which makes our.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, to be honest, we talk about a few different things such as strokes, my studies or our work projects on these topics helps me relax and sometimes we talk about each other can have a a pleasant moment and we can serve problems each other.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well to be honest, I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more comfortable to sharing personal things in A1 face to face conversation. Uh, it can make me unwind and a group of chatting is a little anxiety to make for me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well it depends, when I'm free I prefer to talk in person because it feels more natural and I can say people's experiences. But when I'm busy at work I usually chat online because it convenient and it time saving.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, not really. I don't really argue with my friend, uh, because I we respect each other and uh, we often go hacking or have coffee together, which can helps strength our bond and makes it easy for, uh, our talk openly.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答总体自然,但句子不完整且有重复与语法错误。建议在开头直接给出主题句,然后用1-2个简洁的支持句补充具体例子或原因,注意句子完整性和避免冗余。练习时可把答案控制在3-4句内,并检查主谓一致和逻辑连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For instance, I often call my best friend to share small jokes and talk about any problems, and that always makes me feel better.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 内容含混且有多处用词和语法错误(如“strokes”“serve problems”)。建议先列出1-3个常聊话题并分别提供简短具体细节或例子,使用连接词(for example, sometimes)保持逻辑。注意用词准确。
Ví dụ: We usually chat about our studies, work projects and daily life. For example, we discuss deadlines and help each other solve problems at work, and sometimes we just share funny stories to relax.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好,但存在语法错误和不自然短语(如“to sharing”、“A1 face to face”)。建议用一到两句清楚说明偏好原因,再举一两个具体情境。练习正确使用不定式和形容词形式,避免填充词(uh)。
Ví dụ: I prefer talking with just one friend because I'm more comfortable sharing personal things one-on-one. For example, I often have deep conversations with a close friend over coffee rather than in a noisy group.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答结构合理但有小错误和不自然表达(如“say people's experiences”,“it convenient and it time saving”)。建议改为更自然的对比句,使用连接词(however, while)并注意冠词与时态。
Ví dụ: It depends. When I have time I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more natural and allow for better body language. However, when I'm busy at work I usually use messaging apps because they are convenient and save time.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答意思明确但有许多语法和词汇错误(如“we respect each other and uh, we often go hacking”,“helps strength”)。建议直接给出明确判断,然后用一两个具体例子说明原因,注意动词形式和词汇搭配。去掉填充词,保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: Not really. We rarely argue because we respect each other and talk openly. For example, we often have coffee together and discuss issues calmly, which helps strengthen our friendship.
× For example, I often catch up with my best friend about everything from small jokes to several problems, which makes our.
✓ For example, I often catch up with my best friend about everything, from small jokes to serious problems, which brings us closer.
原句句子结构不完整,结尾的“which makes our.”缺少宾语和完整的从句,导致句意不明。建议补全从句并调整词语使表达自然:使用“brings us closer”(使我们更亲近)来准确表达因聊天而增进关系的意思;同时将“several problems”改为“serious problems”更符合语境。
× Well, to be honest, we talk about a few different things such as strokes, my studies or our work projects on these topics helps me relax and sometimes we talk about each other can have a a pleasant moment and we can serve problems each other.
✓ Well, to be honest, we talk about a few different things such as stories, my studies, or our work projects. Talking about these topics helps me relax. Sometimes we share pleasant moments and help each other with problems.
原句存在多处结构问题和词汇错误:1) “strokes”显然用词错误,应为“stories”;2) 原句把多个想法强行连成一长句,缺少标点与连接词,导致语义混乱;3) “we talk about each other can have a a pleasant moment”语序和重复错误;4) “serve problems each other”用词错误,应为“help each other with problems”。建议将长句拆分为几句,校正词汇并使用正确的动词短语。
× Well to be honest, I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more comfortable to sharing personal things in A1 face to face conversation.
✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more comfortable sharing personal things in a face-to-face conversation.
问题包括:1) 不需要不定式“to”后接动名词,正确用法是“comfortable sharing”;2) “A1”显得无意义且应去掉;3) “face to face”应连字符为“face-to-face”或保持为形容词短语。建议去掉多余词并修正短语搭配。
× Uh, it can make me unwind and a group of chatting is a little anxiety to make for me.
✓ It can help me unwind, and chatting in a group makes me a little anxious.
原句形容词/副词使用错误:“a group of chatting”搭配不当,应为“chatting in a group”;“a little anxiety to make for me”语序和词类错误,应使用形容词“anxious”来描述人的感受。建议使用“makes me a little anxious”。
× Well it depends, when I'm free I prefer to talk in person because it feels more natural and I can say people's experiences.
✓ Well, it depends. When I'm free I prefer to talk in person because it feels more natural and I can share people's experiences.
原句“say people's experiences”搭配不当,动词“say”不能与“experiences”搭配表达“分享经历”的意思,应改为“share”。同时需要在“depends”后加标点以改善句子边界。
× But when I'm busy at work I usually chat online because it convenient and it time saving.
✓ But when I'm busy at work I usually chat online because it's convenient and time-saving.
原句缺少缩写“it's”,并且“time saving”应加连字符作形容词或改为“saves time”。建议使用“it's convenient and time-saving”或“because it saves time”。
× Well, not really. I don't really argue with my friend, uh, because I we respect each other and uh, we often go hacking or have coffee together, which can helps strength our bond and makes it easy for, uh, our talk openly.
✓ Well, not really. I don't really argue with my friend because we respect each other, and we often go hiking or have coffee together, which can help strengthen our bond and make it easier for us to talk openly.
存在多处语法错误:1) “because I we respect”主语错误,去掉多余“I”;2) “go hacking”拼写错误,应为“go hiking”;3) “which can helps strength our bond”含有三处错误:动词should be base form after modal/auxiliary “can”所以“helps”应为“help”,名词“strength”应为动词“strengthen”;4) “makes it easy for, uh, our talk openly”语序和结构错误,改为“make it easier for us to talk openly”。以上修改修正了人称、动词形式和词汇用法。