Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I'm very like chatting with my friends. Uh, even on the class, uh, teacher always called me and my friend that we are chatting box.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat about almost everything happened in my life, in our life. I like uh, what did I eat on my breakfast and what happened, uh, yesterday after school.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because if I chat with a group of people in the most of the time I don't got any chance to speak a lot. I'm not very talkable people compared to a group of people, so I choose talk with only one friend and that I feel relaxed.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I in my opinion I think both is OK, but for me I will choose to communicate face to face. If I If you chat with your friend face to face you can notice different emotion on their face that's very funny and the real.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
And to be honest, no, I do not always argue with friends, but they are very like argue with me. I think that is funny when they argue with my point.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 句子不够自然且有语法错误,语无伦次。回答应直接给出肯定句并补充一两句具体细节。注意时态与词序,例如不要说“I’m very like”。尽量去掉频繁的填充词(uh)。建议用一句主题句+一两句例子或频率说明,最多5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. For example, we often talk during breaks about our hobbies and school life, and sometimes our teacher even calls us out for chatting in class.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 内容较为具体但表达混乱,语法错误(例如“what did I eat on my breakfast” 应为“what I ate for breakfast”)。使用连接词让内容更连贯,并给出更具体的例子或一两个主题。控制句子长度,避免重复“in my life, in our life”。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about everyday things in my life, such as what I ate for breakfast or what happened at school yesterday. Sometimes we also discuss our plans for the weekend or homework.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好但有较多语法和用词错误(如“don't got”、“I'm not very talkable people”)。建议用更简洁的结构:先直接回答,再用两三个连贯的理由支持,使用合适的连接词如“because”或“so”。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because I get more chances to speak and feel more relaxed. In a group I often don't have time to say much, so one-on-one conversations suit me better.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 表达基本清楚,但有重复和语法问题(例如“I in my opinion I think both is OK”重复且主谓不一致)。应直接回答并简洁说明原因,使用恰当的词汇如“real”可替换为“authentic”或“genuine”。注意避免重复短语。
Ví dụ: I think both are fine, but I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see your friend's facial expressions and emotions, which makes conversations more genuine and enjoyable.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 57.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且有语法错误(如“they are very like argue with me”、“argue with my point”)。建议先直接回答,再说明频率或例子,用更自然的表达例如“I don't often argue with friends, but sometimes we disagree and I find it amusing.”
Ví dụ: Honestly, I don't often argue with my friends, but sometimes we have disagreements about small things. I usually find these arguments funny because they are not serious and we quickly make up.
× Uh, yes, I'm very like chatting with my friends.
✓ Uh, yes, I really like chatting with my friends.
错误类型接近主谓一致和词语搭配(归入“第三人称单数/现在时/词语使用”范畴)。原句中“I’m very like”是不符合英语表达的。正确说法是“I really like”或“I like ... very much”。建议记住常见表达:use 'like' with adverbials such as 'really' 或 'very much' 来加强语气。
× Uh, even on the class, uh, teacher always called me and my friend that we are chatting box.
✓ Uh, even in class, the teacher always calls me and my friends and says that we are chatting.
该句存在介词、冠词、主谓一致及句子结构错误。'on the class' 应为 'in class';缺少冠词 'the' before 'teacher' 或用 'our teacher';'teacher always called' 时态和主语不符,应为 'teacher always calls'(习惯性动作);'me and my friend' 改为 'me and my friends' 更自然;'that we are chatting box' 无意义,推测原意为老师说我们在聊天,应该说 'says that we are chatting'。建议:注意固定搭配(in class),使用正确时态描述习惯性动作(simple present)。
× I usually chat about almost everything happened in my life, in our life.
✓ I usually chat about almost everything that happened in my life or in our lives.
此句存在时态和从句连接问题。'happened' 用于过去发生的事件时可,但要加关系代词 'that' 连接;'in our life' 应为复数 'in our lives'。如果想表达经常发生的事,用现在完成或一般现在也可(例如 'that has happened' 或 'that happens')。建议:使用关系代词连接描述过去事件,并注意可数名词的单复数。
× I like uh, what did I eat on my breakfast and what happened, uh, yesterday after school.
✓ I like talking about what I ate for breakfast and what happened yesterday after school.
此句有疑问句语序被误用在陈述句中('what did I eat' 是疑问式,应改为陈述式 'what I ate')。'on my breakfast' 不正确,常用搭配是 'for breakfast'。'I like talking about ...' 比单独 'I like ...' 更流畅。建议:陈述句中避免使用疑问语序;记住固定介词搭配 'for breakfast'。
× I prefer to chat with only one friend because if I chat with a group of people in the most of the time I don't got any chance to speak a lot.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because if I chat with a group of people most of the time I don't get many chances to speak.
句子有主谓一致和时态/用词错误。'in the most of the time' 应为 'most of the time' 或 'for most of the time';'I don't got' 错用过去式助动词,正确为 'I don't get';'any chance to speak a lot' 更自然为 'many chances to speak'。建议:注意助动词 don't/doesn't 后接动词原形;使用正确短语 'most of the time'。
× I'm not very talkable people compared to a group of people, so I choose talk with only one friend and that I feel relaxed.
✓ I'm not very talkative compared to a group, so I choose to talk with only one friend because that makes me feel relaxed.
'talkable' 不是正确形容词,应为 'talkative'(爱说话的);'people' 与主语 'I'm' 不匹配,应改为形容词短语 'compared to a group' 或 'compared with groups of people';'I choose talk' 缺少不定式 'to';'and that I feel relaxed' 结构不自然,应改为 'because that makes me feel relaxed'。建议:学习常用形容词 'talkative';注意不定式 'choose to do' 的用法;连接理由时用 'because' 或 'which'。
× I in my opinion I think both is OK, but for me I will choose to communicate face to face.
✓ In my opinion, I think both are OK, but for me I would choose to communicate face to face.
句首多余 'I'('I in my opinion I think' 改为 'In my opinion, I think' 或仅 'I think')。'both is OK' 主谓不一致,应为 'both are OK'。'I will choose' 在此为偏好陈述,用 'would choose' 或 'prefer' 更礼貌自然。建议:避免重复主语,注意 'both' 作主语时用复数动词;使用情态词表达偏好。
× If I If you chat with your friend face to face you can notice different emotion on their face that's very funny and the real.
✓ If you chat with your friend face to face, you can notice different emotions on their face; that's very funny and real.
句中有重复 'If I If you';条件句主语不明确,改为统一 'you';'different emotion' 应使用复数 'different emotions';'on their face' 可接受但若指单人用 'his or her face';'the real' 不通,应为 'real' 或 'the real thing'。建议:注意条件句结构(If + 主语 + 动词),避免重复;名词可数时注意单复数。
× And to be honest, no, I do not always argue with friends, but they are very like argue with me.
✓ To be honest, no, I don't usually argue with my friends, but they often like to argue with me.
'do not always argue' 表达不自然,可改为 'don't usually argue';'they are very like argue' 语法错误,应为 'they often like to argue' 或 'they really like arguing';'with friends' 更自然为 'with my friends'。建议:使用副词 'usually/often' 放在助动词之后;'like to do' 或 'like doing' 两种表达均可。
× I think that is funny when they argue with my point.
✓ I think that's funny when they argue against my point of view.
'argue with my point' 用法不当,应为 'argue against my point' 或 'argue with me about my point';可用 'point of view' 更自然。建议:学习常见搭配 'argue against' 或 'argue with someone about something'。