Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid vague phrases like "emotional value" — use concrete expressions. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., "enjoy", "cheer me up").

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it cheers me up and reduces stress. For example, I often share personal experiences and discuss future plans like travel or study goals.

Gợi ý: Be specific and correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence naming the main topics, then give one specific example. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "for four more topics", "schooler"). Use linking words like "also" or "besides" for coherence.

Ví dụ: We usually talk about our studies and research because we're classmates. Besides, for fun we often discuss video games and animated films, such as the new popular series we all watched.

Gợi ý: Make the answer concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear preference sentence, then give two specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "so". Avoid repetition and informal phrases like "mess" and numeric "1 by 1"; say "one-on-one" instead.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting one-on-one because group conversations can be chaotic and it's hard to follow the main points. So I usually meet a friend face-to-face when I need a focused conversation.

Gợi ý: Be more fluent and correct grammar. Give a clear conditional structure: state general rule then give two specific examples contrasting situations, using linking words like "however" or "but". Replace awkward phrases like "cost less time" with "saves time".

Ví dụ: It depends. For small everyday matters I prefer social media because it’s convenient and saves time. However, for important plans—like organizing a trip or school arrangements—I choose to talk face-to-face.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and one concise reason with an example. Fix grammar and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" and give a brief consequence or example to make it specific.

Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I’m quite shy and I dislike conflict. For example, if a disagreement arises I usually try to stay calm and suggest a compromise instead of arguing.

× chatting with friends can provide me emotional value and bring me happiness.

✓ Chatting with friends can provide me with emotional support and make me happy.

The phrase 'provide me emotional value' is unnatural and 'emotional value' is not a typical collocation. Use 'provide me with' and 'emotional support' or 'make me happy'. Also 'bring me happiness' is grammatically acceptable but 'make me happy' is more natural. Suggestion: Use common collocations: 'provide me with emotional support' or 'give me emotional support'.

× I love to share my experience with my friends and make plans with them about the future.

✓ I love sharing my experiences with my friends and making plans with them for the future.

When listing activities, using the -ing form (gerund) keeps parallel structure: 'sharing' and 'making'. Also 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' for general activities, and 'about the future' is better expressed as 'for the future'. Suggestion: Keep parallel gerund forms and pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× Well, for four more topics, we often chat about our schooler and our research field, and for entertainment, to often chat about video games and animation.

✓ Well, on academic topics we often chat about our school and our research field, and for entertainment we often talk about video games and animation.

The original has several issues: 'for four more topics' is unclear and likely a misuse of 'for formal topics' or 'on formal topics'; 'schooler' is incorrect - use 'school' or 'studies'; 'to often chat' interrupts word order; better parallel structure is 'we often chat about X and Y' and 'we often talk about...'. Suggestion: Use clear topic phrases ('on academic/formal topics') and maintain parallel structure and correct nouns.

× We were adorable.

✓ We were close.

'Adorable' describes being cute or lovable and is unusual for self-description of friends' conversations. The intended meaning is likely 'we were close' or 'we got along well.' Also no strict grammar error but word choice is wrong. Suggestion: Choose verbs/adjectives that fit context: 'close', 'friendly', 'comfortable with each other'.

× Well in my personal view I love chatting with in one person because I think chatting with a group of people may be mess and you cannot catch the key point and a group of people with with different personalities may be unsuitable for them to chat into each other.

✓ Well, in my personal view I prefer chatting one-on-one because chatting in a group can be messy; you may not catch the main point, and people with different personalities may find it hard to communicate with each other.

Multiple errors: 'chatting with in one person' should be 'chatting one-on-one' or 'chatting with one person'; 'may be mess' should be 'may be messy'; 'catch the key point' is better as 'catch the main point'; 'with with' is duplicated; 'unsuitable for them to chat into each other' is incorrect—use 'hard to communicate with each other'. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions ('with', 'one-on-one') and adjective forms ('messy') and clearer phrasing for communication difficulties.

× So I like chat 1 by 1 face to face.

✓ So I like to chat one-on-one face to face.

Use the infinitive 'to chat' after 'I like' and write 'one-on-one' rather than '1 by 1'. Suggestion: Use natural expressions: 'one-on-one' and 'face to face' (or 'face-to-face').

× Well that depends on the situation. If we are talk about a very small things, we I like to chat in social media because it is more convenient and cost less time.

✓ Well, that depends on the situation. If we are talking about small things, I like to chat on social media because it is more convenient and takes less time.

Use continuous 'are talking' for ongoing/habitual actions in this context; 'a very small things' mixes singular and plural—use 'small things'; 'we I like' is an error—should be 'I like'; 'chat in social media' should be 'chat on social media'; 'cost less time' should be 'take less time'. Suggestion: Match subject and verb forms, use correct preposition 'on social media', and use 'take less time'.

× But for some forms topics such as plans to go to school, I would chat on offline face to face.

✓ But for some formal topics, such as planning to go to school, I would meet and chat face to face.

'forms topics' should be 'formal topics'; 'plans to go to school' better as 'planning to go to school'; 'chat on offline face to face' is ungrammatical—use 'meet and chat face to face' or 'chat offline, face to face'. Suggestion: Use correct adjectives ('formal'), gerund forms for activities ('planning'), and natural phrases for in-person communication.

× Actually I almost never argue with my friends because I'm a shy person and I don't want to argue with them.

✓ Actually, I almost never argue with my friends because I'm a shy person and I don't want to argue with them.

This sentence is grammatically fine; added comma after 'Actually' improves flow. No modal error; included to satisfy only listed types—minor punctuation only. Suggestion: Use commas to separate discourse markers.

× Then that that feels me let me feel uncomfortable and I feel sorry for them if I argue with them.

✓ Arguing makes me feel uncomfortable, and I would feel sorry toward them if I argued with them.

The original has duplicated 'that', wrong word order 'feels me let me feel', and awkward tense. 'Arguing makes me feel uncomfortable' is a clear present-tense statement; 'I would feel sorry for them if I argued with them' uses conditional to express hypothetical. Suggestion: Use clear subject-verb structure and conditional forms for hypothetical scenarios.