Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, actually, yes, I like chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Jack. Yeah, he's also, uh, like chatting with me. And he just like my brother, yeah, he always give me some advice about my study and my work, all my researches. Yeah, chatting with friend is a cappy thing, yeah.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, I usually chat with your friend about the study. Yeah, especially in the scientific research. Yeah. For instance, the computer version area. Yeah, we get the AI agent and the the generative technologies. Yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer just chat with only one friend. Yeah, the main reason for me is that it is more a convenient and more useful for me to categorize one one person. Yeah, it can concentrate on my on my opinion and I can consider it festively.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well, for me, social media is better. Yeah. The main reason for me is that, umm, I'm really a introvert person. Yeah, uh, I'd like to talk about something. Yeah. Just just online it, it's, it's more useful and convenient. Uh, speaking face to face is too difficult for me.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, definitely, yes, uh, maybe it seems to be not, not not great, but uh, when we, when we have an argument, it is also a combined with the, uh, the correct opinions or some, uh, useful advices about it, you know?
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、准确,避免重复和口头语(如 "uh", "yeah");使用一个主题句,然后用一两句具体细节支持,例如说明朋友如何帮助你;注意语法(主谓一致、名词单复数和词形)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend Jack. He is like a brother to me and often gives helpful advice about my studies and research, which makes our conversations meaningful.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 回答需更明确、用词准确,避免人称错误(如把 'your' 写成应为 'my')和断断续续的填充词;用一两个连词组织细节,并给出具体例子或主题。
Ví dụ: I usually talk with my friends about our studies, particularly scientific research. For example, we often discuss developments in computational fields such as AI agents and generative models.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰地表达原因,使用连词(because, so)连接句子;避免不正确或模糊的词汇(如 'categorize' 和 'festively' 使用不当);用具体说法说明独聊的好处。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it is easier to focus and have a deeper, more meaningful conversation. For example, in a one-on-one chat I can fully explain my ideas and get focused feedback.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要更流畅并改进语法(冠词、词序);减少犹豫词,明确给出一两个具体原因和例子,说明为何社交媒体更适合你。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because I am quite introverted and find it easier to express myself online. For instance, messaging lets me think before I reply and avoids the pressure of face-to-face conversations.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 57.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接并条理清楚地说明是否争吵,以及争吵的结果或原因;避免重复、语法错误和不完整结构;用具体例子说明争论如何带来积极影响。
Ví dụ: Yes, we do sometimes argue, but usually those discussions help us reach better opinions. For example, a recent disagreement about our research methods led us to combine ideas and improve our experimental design.
× Yeah, he's also, uh, like chatting with me.
✓ Yeah, he also likes chatting with me.
动词在第三人称单数(he)时需要加 -s。原句使用“like”与主语“he”不一致,正确形式是“likes”。建议记住一般现在时第三人称单数要在动词后加 -s。
× And he just like my brother, yeah, he always give me some advice about my study and my work, all my researches.
✓ And he is just like my brother; he always gives me some advice about my studies and my work, all my research.
句中有多处问题:1) “he just like”缺少系动词,应为“he is just like”;2) “always give”动词与第三人称单数主语不一致,应为“gives”;3) “my study”在此语境应使用复数“my studies”;4) “researches”通常用不可数名词“research”。建议复习系动词用法、第三人称单数动词变化以及可数/不可数名词用法。
× Yeah, chatting with friend is a cappy thing, yeah.
✓ Yeah, chatting with friends is a happy thing, yeah.
1) “chatting with friend”应使用复数“friends”或加定冠词/不定冠词“a friend”;2) “cappy”显然为拼写错误,应为“happy”。建议注意名词单复数和拼写检查。
× Well, I usually chat with your friend about the study.
✓ Well, I usually chat with my friends about my studies.
句中“your friend”与说话者身份不符,应该用“my friends”;此外“the study”在此处一般用复数或更自然的“my studies”。建议根据说话主语选择正确的物主代词并注意名词的数量形式。
× Yeah, especially in the scientific research.
✓ Yeah, especially in scientific research.
短语“in the scientific research”不自然,通常说“in scientific research”或“in research”。建议在泛指学科或领域时省略定冠词。
× For instance, the computer version area.
✓ For instance, the field of computer vision.
原句结构不完整且词汇错误:应为“computer vision”(计算机视觉)而不是“computer version”,并需用完整短语“the field of”。建议注意固定搭配和完整句子表达。
× Yeah, we get the AI agent and the the generative technologies.
✓ Yeah, we have AI agents and generative technologies.
1) 冠词“the the”重复;2) 在泛指时不需要定冠词,应使用复数或无冠词;3) “get”在此语境中用“have”更自然。建议复习冠词用法及常用动词搭配。
× Well, I prefer just chat with only one friend.
✓ Well, I prefer just to chat with only one friend.
动词“prefer”后可接动词不定式“to chat”或动名词“chatting”。原句中直接用动词原形不符合规范。建议在“prefer”后使用“To do”或“-ing”形式。
× the main reason for me is that it is more a convenient and more useful for me to categorize one one person.
✓ The main reason for me is that it is more convenient and more useful for me to focus on one person.
1) “more a convenient”冠词位置错误,应为“more convenient”或“a more convenient option”;2) “categorize one one person”用词不当且重复,改为“focus on one person”更自然;3) “one one”重复。建议简化表达并注意形容词前冠词和比较结构。
× Yeah, it can concentrate on my on my opinion and I can consider it festively.
✓ Yeah, it can help me concentrate on my opinion and I can consider it carefully.
1) “it can concentrate on my opinion”主语不明确,改为“help me concentrate”;2) “on my on my”重复;3) “festively”意思不对,应为“carefully”(认真地)。建议选用合适的动词搭配并注意副词选择。
× Well, for me, social media is better.
✓ Well, for me, social media is better.
此句语法正确,无需更改。保持原样。
× I'm really a introvert person.
✓ I'm really an introverted person.
1) “a introvert”前元音发音需用冠词“an”;2) 更自然表达是“an introverted person”或“introverted”。建议注意冠词与发音规则以及形容词形式。
× I'd like to talk about something. Yeah. Just just online it, it's, it's more useful and convenient.
✓ I'd like to talk about something online; it's more useful and convenient.
“Just just online it”词序和结构混乱,应合并为“talk about something online”。去掉多余词并调整语序。建议简洁表达并把地点状语放在动词短语之后。
× Uh, speaking face to face is too difficult for me.
✓ Speaking face-to-face is too difficult for me.
语法上正确,仅需连字符将“face-to-face”写作复合词以提高书面语准确性。建议在书面表达中使用连字符。
× Well, definitely, yes, uh, maybe it seems to be not, not not great, but uh, when we, when we have an argument, it is also a combined with the, uh, the correct opinions or some, uh, useful advices about it, you know?
✓ Well, definitely yes. Maybe it doesn't seem great, but when we have an argument, it often brings out correct opinions or some useful advice about it.
原句存在多处问题:1) 重复和语气词过多导致句子结构混乱;2) “seems to be not great”应改为“doesn't seem great”或“seems not great”;3) “it is also a combined with”是不正确的被动或结构,应改为“it often brings out”或“it can be combined with”;4) “advices”不可数,改为“advice”。建议精简句子,避免重复填充词,注意不可数名词用法与正确句子结构。