Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I really enjoy chatting with my friends every day because we can share each other, our story or we can talk about food and the holiday shopping, everything.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually talk with shopping with my friend because we all love shopping. Shopping make me and my friends feel very relaxed.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I will say one phrase because I prefer good and deep conversation so I really enjoying chat with one friend or two friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer fast to fast communicating because I can see my friend's face and body language. But if I use social media maybe I just turn Can you know the word but I don't feel anything.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
We have a different ideas. Maybe she won't do that, but I don't want. Then we argue, but we usually talk together because we very love each other.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然且结构清晰。先给出直接肯定的主题句,然后用一两句具体细节支持,避免语法错误和冗长表达。注意代词和名词搭配(例如 “share things with each other” 而不是 “share each other”)。尝试用连词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy chatting with my friends every day because we share personal stories and talk about things like food and holiday shopping. These conversations help us relax and stay close.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确并使用正确的语法。先给主题句(通常谈论的主题),然后用一两个具体例子或原因支持。注意动词形式(shopping makes)和名词搭配(talk about shopping)。可使用连接词如 "because" 或 "for example" 提高连贯性。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about shopping because we all love it. For example, we discuss new stores, sales, and what to buy, which makes us feel relaxed and happy.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接并简洁。先说明偏好(one-on-one or small group),然后说明原因并给出简短例子。注意语法(I prefer, I enjoy chatting)和数词表达(one or two friends)。避免模糊表达如 “say one phrase”。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one or two friends because I enjoy deeper conversations. For example, when it's just one friend, we can discuss personal topics and understand each other better.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更清晰表达偏好和理由。先直接回答(face-to-face or social media),然后给出两三点具体原因并用连词连接。避免不连贯或难以理解的短语。可比较两种方式的优缺点。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friend's facial expressions and body language, which makes conversations more meaningful. Social media is convenient but feels less personal.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更有条理并用完整句子。先直接回答(yes or no),然后说明原因并举例或描述解决方式。注意语法(different ideas, we usually talk it out)和情感表达的自然性。可用连接词如 "however" 或 "so"。
Ví dụ: Sometimes we argue because we have different ideas, but we always talk things through afterwards. For example, if we disagree about plans, we discuss compromises until we're both happy.
× I really enjoy chatting with my friends every day because we can share each other, our story or we can talk about food and the holiday shopping, everything.
✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends every day because we can share things with each other, tell our stories, or talk about food and holiday shopping — everything.
原句中“share each other”用法错误,动词share需要明确宾语,且常用短语是“share things with each other”。此外“our story”宜用复数“our stories”。建议在动词后加具体宾语,并使用复数形式,句子更通顺:"share things with each other"和"tell our stories"。
× I usually talk with shopping with my friend because we all love shopping. Shopping make me and my friends feel very relaxed.
✓ I usually talk about shopping with my friend because we all love shopping. Shopping makes my friends and me feel very relaxed.
原句“talk with shopping”搭配错误,应使用“talk about”来表达“谈论……”。此外“Shopping make”动词与主语不一致(shopping单数),应为“makes”。宾语顺序常用“my friends and me”。建议记住动词搭配(talk about)和主谓一致规则。
× Shopping make me and my friends feel very relaxed.
✓ Shopping makes my friends and me feel very relaxed.
主语是单数名词“Shopping”,谓语动词应加-s,变为“makes”。另外宾语使用“my friends and me”更自然。建议复习第三人称单数现在时的动词变化规则。
× Definitely, I will say one phrase because I prefer good and deep conversation so I really enjoying chat with one friend or two friends.
✓ Definitely, I would say one person because I prefer good, deep conversations, so I really enjoy chatting with one or two friends.
句中混用了时态和词类:"I will say one phrase"不合语境,应为“I would say one person”。“I really enjoying chat”动词形式错误,应为“I really enjoy chatting”。“conversation”若表示多次或一般情况应用复数“conversations”。建议使用一致的现在时态和正确的动词形式(enjoy + -ing)。
× I really enjoying chat with one friend or two friends.
✓ I really enjoy chatting with one or two friends.
动词结构错误:动词enjoy后应接动名词(enjoy + -ing),但原句用了“enjoying”作为谓语,且“chat”应使用动名词形式“chatting”。建议记住“enjoy + -ing”的固定结构。
× I prefer fast to fast communicating because I can see my friend's face and body language.
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friend's facial expressions and body language.
原句“fast to fast communicating”完全不合规则,可能想表达“face-to-face”。应使用短语“face-to-face communication”或“communicating face to face”。另外“friend's face”可更自然地说“facial expressions”。建议熟悉常用固定搭配如“face-to-face”。
× But if I use social media maybe I just turn Can you know the word but I don't feel anything.
✓ But if I use social media, maybe I just see the words, and I don't feel anything.
原句结构混乱,“turn Can you know the word”没有意义。根据语境应表达“在社交媒体上我只能看到文字,感受不到什么”。因此重构为“maybe I just see the words, and I don't feel anything.” 建议简化句子,使用明确主谓宾,并保持逻辑连贯。
× We have a different ideas. Maybe she won't do that, but I don't want. Then we argue, but we usually talk together because we very love each other.
✓ We have different ideas. Maybe she doesn't want to do that, but I do. Then we argue, but we usually talk it over because we love each other very much.
原句有多处代词和动词形式问题:"a different ideas"中冠词与复数不匹配,应为"different ideas"。"she won't do that, but I don't want"表达不清,改为"she doesn't want to do that, but I do"更明确。"we usually talk together"通常说"talk it over"(讨论解决)。"we very love each other"副词位置错误,应为"love each other very much"。建议注意冠词与名词数的一致、代词指代清晰,以及副词位置。