Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. In my daily life I often chat with my cousin, sister, friends about what happened during the day and our interest in plans in the future. I think chatting with friends can help me relaxing.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat about interesting thing happen during the weekday and my research proposals designed for the future experiments with my friends because she always gives me some advice and help me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am a quite shy person. Chatting with a group of people will makes me feel very nervous while chatting one-on-one makes me more friendly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more efficient than communicate on the social media. I can read the people's emotions and avoid some confusions caused by.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because different people have different priorities and expectations. When this happens, we always, uh, discuss with a calm emotion and uh, find a compromise.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁自然,注意语法和搭配(如“I help me relaxing”应为“help me relax”)。开头直接回应后用一两句具体细节支持即可,并使用连接词使句子流畅。可以把句子分成不超过五句,避免冗长。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I often chat with my cousin, sister and friends about our day and future plans. These conversations help me relax and stay connected with them.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 需要更准确的语法和更具体的细节。注意单复数和时态(e.g. “interesting things that happen”)。说明谁是“she”并用连接词组织理由。句子不要太长,控制在五句内。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about interesting things that happen during the week and my research proposals. I discuss experimental plans with one close friend because she often gives useful advice and practical help.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 表达要更自然,注意词序和搭配(如“a quite shy person”应为“quite a shy person”;“will makes”错误)。可用一到两句对比并给出原因,使用连接词“because”或“whereas”。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I am quite a shy person. Group conversations make me nervous, whereas one-on-one talks help me open up.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 注意动词不定式和介词搭配(应为“more efficient than communicating via social media”)。补全未完成的句子并给出具体例子,比如如何通过面谈读懂情绪。保持句子简短且连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more efficient than communicating via social media. In person I can read facial expressions and tone of voice, which helps avoid misunderstandings.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 内容挺好,但要去掉填充词(uh)并用更自然的表达(例如“stay calm”或“discuss calmly”)。可以补充具体例子说明一次争论如何解决,让回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different priorities. When that happens we try to stay calm, discuss our viewpoints and usually reach a compromise, for example by splitting responsibilities.
× Yes I do. In my daily life I often chat with my cousin, sister, friends about what happened during the day and our interest in plans in the future. I think chatting with friends can help me relaxing.
✓ Yes, I do. In my daily life I often chat with my cousin, sister and friends about what happened during the day and our interests and plans for the future. I think chatting with friends can help me relax.
错误类型:现在时/动词形式以及名词复数和动词不定式使用不当。解释:1) friends 前应与 sister 用 and 连接并用复数 interests 表示多项兴趣;2) 'our interest in plans in the future' 不自然,应改为 'our interests and plans for the future';3) 'help me relaxing' 中 help 后接动词应为不带 -ing 的原形,故改为 'help me relax'。建议:注意并列名词使用 and,复数名词用复数形式,help 后使用动词原形。
× I usually chat about interesting thing happen during the weekday and my research proposals designed for the future experiments with my friends because she always gives me some advice and help me.
✓ I usually chat about interesting things that happen during the weekdays and my research proposals for future experiments with my friends because she always gives me advice and helps me.
错误类型:现在时/单复数/从句和第三人称单数。解释:1) 'interesting thing' 应为复数 'interesting things';2) 'happen' 描述习惯性动作应用现在时,句中应加关系词 'that' 或 'which': 'things that happen';3) 'weekday' 一般用复数 'weekdays';4) 'research proposals designed for the future experiments' 冗长,改为 'research proposals for future experiments' 更自然;5) 主语 'she' 为第三人称单数,动词需加 -s:'helps';6) 'gives me some advice' 可简化为 'gives me advice'。建议:注意名词复数、关系代词和第三人称单数动词形式。
× I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am a quite shy person. Chatting with a group of people will makes me feel very nervous while chatting one-on-one makes me more friendly.
✓ I prefer chatting with just one friend because I am quite a shy person. Chatting with a group of people makes me feel very nervous, while chatting one-on-one makes me feel more at ease.
错误类型:第三人称单数及形容词顺序和用法。解释:1) 'will makes' 中主语是 -ing 名词短语,谓语应为 'makes'(不加 will)且去掉多余的 will,且要与主语单复数一致;2) 'a quite shy person' 形容词顺序应为 'quite a shy person' 或更常见 'quite shy';3) 'more friendly' 在此语境下不合适,改为 'more at ease' 或 'feel friendlier' 更自然;4) 在第二句中保持主语一致并加入 'feel' 使结构完整。建议:注意主谓一致,不滥用 will,形容词搭配更自然的表达。
× I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more efficient than communicate on the social media. I can read the people's emotions and avoid some confusions caused by.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is more efficient than communicating on social media. I can read people's emotions and avoid some confusion caused by misunderstandings.
错误类型:介词和动词形式及冠词使用。解释:1) 'than communicate on the social media' 比较结构中需使用动名词 'communicating',且 'social media' 通常不加定冠词 'the';2) 'the people's emotions' 前不需要定冠词,直接 'people's emotions' 更自然;3) 'avoid some confusions caused by.' 不完整,应说明由什么引起,例如 'caused by misunderstandings',且 'confusion' 常用不可数。建议:比较时用动名词,注意 'social media' 的用法,避免句末不完整表达并使用不可数名词时不加复数形式。
× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because different people have different priorities and expectations. When this happens, we always, uh, discuss with a calm emotion and uh, find a compromise.
✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because different people have different priorities and expectations. When this happens, we always discuss calmly and find a compromise.
错误类型:现在时/副词和名词使用。解释:1) 'discuss with a calm emotion' 表达不自然,应用副词 'discuss calmly' 来修饰动词;2) 'find a compromise' 正确,但前面不需要多余的填充词 'uh';3) 保持句子简洁自然。建议:使用副词修饰动词,避免冗长的名词短语作为方式状语,并在口语转写中尽量去掉填充语以书面化。