Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you like chatting with friends?

Thí sinh

Yes, I like trading with my friends first. I'm trying people so I have a lot of words just can't speak with my friend. When I meet my friend I have a lot of things will show them so I like chatting with my friend.

Giám khảo

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Thí sinh

And with my friend I will try everything I want, just like celebrate story and people teacher uh, anythings wrong with me. I have a lot of things want to share with them. So always I just uh, like a chat and like fun.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Thí sinh

Maybe I prefer to chat with only my one friend because in a group I'm a little shy, I always can't open my mouth, but with my friend I can speak a lot of and see what I want to see.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Thí sinh

Maybe I prefer to communicate face to face because through the phone we can see just little things. Not like my mouse. I can face to face to tell her anything, just like something I can't.

Giám khảo

Do you argue with friends?

Thí sinh

Of course, because something we not always seem same then and in one thing, so I just like it, but my friend didn't understand why I like it, so we will have some argument.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you like chatting with friends?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,表达不清晰,存在语法和词汇错误。建议简化句子结构,直接回答问题,并用简单明了的语言表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me share my thoughts and feelings. When I meet them, I enjoy talking about many things.

What do you usually chat about with friends?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,缺乏连贯性和具体细节。建议使用连接词组织语言,明确表达聊天内容,并提供具体例子。

Ví dụ: I usually chat about my daily life, school, and interesting stories. For example, I like to share funny things that happened to me or talk about my teachers.

Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 表达较为清楚,但语法和用词有误。建议注意语法准确性,使用更自然的表达方式,并适当扩展理由。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel shy in groups. When I talk to one person, I can express myself more freely and comfortably.

Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子,明确比较两种沟通方式的优缺点。

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is easier to understand emotions and expressions. Social media can miss some important details.

Do you argue with friends?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 表达不够清晰,语法错误较多。建议简化句子,明确说明争吵的原因和自己的态度。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, I think arguing can help us understand each other better.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I'm trying people so I have a lot of words just can't speak with my friend.

✓ I'm trying to talk to people so I have a lot of words but just can't speak with my friend.

这里's trying people'用法错误,应该是'trying to talk to people',因为'try'后面需要接动词不定式'to talk',而且'people'是复数,不能直接用作动词的宾语。

Singular and plural issue

× When I meet my friend I have a lot of things will show them so I like chatting with my friend.

✓ When I meet my friends, I have a lot of things to show them, so I like chatting with my friends.

'my friend'应为复数'my friends',因为后面用'will show them','them'指代复数。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And with my friend I will try everything I want, just like celebrate story and people teacher uh, anythings wrong with me.

✓ And with my friends, I will try everything I want, just like celebrating stories and people, teachers, uh, anything wrong with me.

'celebrate story'应改为动名词形式'celebrating stories','anythings'应为'anything',且'people teacher'表达不清,需分开。

Singular and plural issue

× I have a lot of things want to share with them.

✓ I have a lot of things I want to share with them.

缺少关系代词'I',使句子完整。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Maybe I prefer to chat with only my one friend because in a group I'm a little shy, I always can't open my mouth, but with my friend I can speak a lot of and see what I want to see.

✓ Maybe I prefer to chat with only one friend because in a group I'm a little shy, I always can't open my mouth, but with my friend I can speak a lot and see what I want to see.

'only my one friend'应为'only one friend','speak a lot of'后面不接宾语,去掉'of'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Maybe I prefer to communicate face to face because through the phone we can see just little things.

✓ Maybe I prefer to communicate face to face because through the phone we can see just a few things.

'just little things'应为'just a few things',表示可数名词的少量。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Not like my mouse.

✓ Not like my mouth.

'mouse'应为'mouth',发音相近但意思不同。

Sentence structure errors

× I can face to face to tell her anything, just like something I can't.

✓ I can tell her anything face to face, just like some things I can't say otherwise.

句子结构混乱,'face to face'应放在动词后,且补充完整表达。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Of course, because something we not always seem same then and in one thing, so I just like it, but my friend didn't understand why I like it, so we will have some argument.

✓ Of course, because sometimes we don't always seem the same on one thing, so I just like it, but my friend doesn't understand why I like it, so we have some arguments.

'something'应为'sometimes','we not always seem same then and in one thing'语序和用词错误,改为'we don't always seem the same on one thing',时态和主谓一致错误也已修正。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Fun— Merriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Wrong— Inappropriate; Illegal; Amiss; Immorality; Misdeed
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