Museum— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then explain one or two clear reasons. Use accurate phrases such as “display artifacts they have discovered” and “exhibit their work.” Avoid unclear wording like “put their search ancient things” and “show their things.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I think museums are important because they preserve history and make art accessible to the public. For example, they can display artifacts discovered by archaeologists and exhibit works by local artists.

Gợi ý: Your answer has a good structure, but some words and phrases are unclear. Use “several well-known art museums” instead of “large competitory art museums,” and say “attract many visitors.” Add a specific detail only if you can express it clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are quite a few museums in my hometown, especially art museums. Several of them regularly host international exhibitions, so they attract many visitors with their impressive collections.

Gợi ý: Make the time reference complete: “when I was a design student.” Since the question asks whether you visit museums often now, clarify whether you still go regularly or are describing a past habit. Use “museums have” rather than “museums has.”

Ví dụ: I don’t go as often now, but I used to visit museums regularly when I was a design student. I enjoyed seeing the collections and special exhibitions because they gave me ideas for my own work.

Gợi ý: This is a relevant answer with a clear time and example. Check the museum and exhibition wording, keep the past tense consistent (“enjoyed”), and use clearer descriptive phrases such as “vivid colours” and “unusual compositions.”

Ví dụ: The last time I visited a museum was about three months ago. I went to M+ in Hong Kong to see an exhibition of a Korean artist’s work. I particularly enjoyed the contemporary paintings because of their vivid colours and unusual compositions.

× For example, archaeologists can put their search ancient things to show on the museum's events and also artists can show their things.

✓ For example, archaeologists can display the ancient things they have found at museum events, and artists can display their work.

The phrase put their search ancient things to show is not grammatically structured. Use a clear verb such as display, and place the object directly after it. The revised sentence also uses parallel phrasing for the two groups.

× For example, archaeologists can put their search ancient things to show on the museum's events and also artists can show their things.

✓ For example, archaeologists can display the ancient things they have found at museum events, and artists can display their work.

On is not the appropriate preposition for events in this context. Use at museum events to indicate where the items are displayed.

× For example, we have a few large competitory art museums that regularly host international exhibitions, and they attract my visitor nanny visitors because of their impressive collections.

✓ For example, we have a few large competitive art museums that regularly host international exhibitions, and they attract many visitors because of their impressive collections.

Competitory is not the standard adjective; competitive is the correct form. Many visitors is the natural grammatical phrase here, rather than my visitor nanny visitors.

× For example, we have a few large competitory art museums that regularly host international exhibitions, and they attract my visitor nanny visitors because of their impressive collections.

✓ For example, we have a few large competitive art museums that regularly host international exhibitions, and they attract many visitors because of their impressive collections.

Use many before the plural count noun visitors to express a large number. The original wording does not form a grammatical quantifier phrase.

× Yes, I used to visit a museum often when I was. A design student because museums has a lot of impressive collections and special shows.

✓ Yes, I used to visit museums often when I was a design student because museums have a lot of impressive collections and special shows.

The period after was incorrectly breaks the sentence and leaves A design student as a fragment. Keep a design student with was to form the clause when I was a design student.

× Yes, I used to visit a museum often when I was. A design student because museums has a lot of impressive collections and special shows.

✓ Yes, I used to visit museums often when I was a design student because museums have a lot of impressive collections and special shows.

Museums is plural, so it must take the plural verb have, not has. Match the verb form to the subject.

× I went to Implies in Hong Kong to see an exhibition displaying a Korean artist's collection, and I particularly enjoy the contemporary paintings because of their blood colors and usual composition.

✓ I went to Implies in Hong Kong to see an exhibition displaying a Korean artist's collection, and I particularly enjoyed the contemporary paintings because of their blood colors and usual composition.

The answer describes a visit that happened three months ago, so the past-tense verb enjoyed is needed to match went and the past-time context.