Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are many for example, we need to wear uniforms every day and we can't keep very long hair because that may disrupt our view when we are doing assignments and moreover, we can't eat or chit chat on teachers lessons because they.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think it depends because on the one hand rules can help those who can't have a very strong sense of self-discipline to have a more decent behavior, but meanwhile it may, you know, keep some children from.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm very lucky to have so many dedicated teachers through my whole learning journey. For example, one of my English teacher is very responsible while she will guided us to finish our assignments as well as give us tips on our daily habits.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Thí sinh
Maybe fewer because as some of the rules can lock over creativity and imagination. I think there may be more own space for us. Can better let us, you know, cherish our own talents and give our own.
Giám khảo
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Thí sinh
Yes I have had one. He has my history teacher in high school and he always set strict rules on his lessons. UH gave out a lot of assignments and will punish the ones who act badly.
Giám khảo
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Thí sinh
I think for a teacher maybe not because a rule free school will requires teachers to act as the, you know, guided to lead the students to follow the rules. But it will be quite hard and challenging if there are aren't settled rules.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更直接并且语法更准确;避免句子过长且结尾不完整。建议开门见山给出要点,然后用一至两句补充具体细节并使用连词(例如: and, because, moreover)使内容连贯。注意时态和单复数一致,并完整结束句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules. For example, we must wear uniforms every day and are not allowed to have very long hair because it can distract us during lessons. Also, students are not permitted to eat or chat during the teacher's class to maintain order.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答结构不完整且有口语填充词(like 'you know')和句子中断。要先给明确立场,然后用两点理由支持,每点用连词连接并尽量提供具体例子或后果。避免中断句子。
Ví dụ: I think it depends. On the one hand, stricter rules can help students who lack self-discipline to behave better and focus on studies. On the other hand, too many rules might suppress creativity and make some students less motivated to participate in class.
Have you ever had a really dedicated teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答总体较好但有语法错误与用词不当(例如'two mistakes: "one of my English teacher"应为 'one of my English teachers';时态和语态需一致)。建议用简洁的主题句并补充一两条具体事例,注意时态和冠词使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. One of my English teachers was extremely dedicated. She guided us step by step to complete our assignments and gave practical tips on studying habits, like how to revise vocabulary daily and manage our time.
Do you prefer to have more or fewer rules at school?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不够流利且句子残缺,词汇搭配不当(如 'lock over creativity')。建议先明确立场,然后用两条连贯的具体理由支持,并举简短例子。避免口语填充词并完成句子。
Ví dụ: I prefer fewer rules. Too many strict rules can stifle creativity and limit opportunities for students to explore their interests. With more freedom, students can develop their talents, for example by joining clubs where they can practice art or music.
Have you ever had a really strict teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答信息明确但语法和时态混乱(例如 'He has my history teacher' 应为 'He was my history teacher';时态一致性问题)。建议用一至两句描述老师严格的具体行为和你的感受或结果,使用正确时态和连词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. He was my high school history teacher and he had very strict rules. He gave a lot of homework and sometimes punished students who were disruptive, which actually helped most of us stay focused.
Would you like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答含混且有语法错误(如 'there are aren't settled rules'),并有口语填充词。建议先给明确答案,然后解释两个具体原因并给出结论,使用连词并纠正语法。
Ví dụ: Probably not. A rule-free school would require teachers to spend a lot of time guiding students individually, which would be very challenging and make classroom management difficult. Therefore I prefer schools with clear but reasonable rules.
× Yes, there are many for example, we need to wear uniforms every day and we can't keep very long hair because that may disrupt our view when we are doing assignments and moreover, we can't eat or chit chat on teachers lessons because they.
✓ Yes, there are many. For example, we need to wear uniforms every day, and we can't keep very long hair because that may obstruct our view when we are doing assignments. Moreover, we can't eat or chit-chat during teachers' lessons because of classroom rules.
问题类型:3(There be issue)。原因:原句缺少句子分隔与从属结构,最后以“because they.”不完整。将复合句拆分并补全,使动词和名词所有格(teachers' lessons)以及介词短语(during)正确使用。建议:把长句分成两到三句,使用完整的从句和正确的所有格或介词。
× I think it depends because on the one hand rules can help those who can't have a very strong sense of self-discipline to have a more decent behavior, but meanwhile it may, you know, keep some children from.
✓ I think it depends. On the one hand, rules can help those who don't have a strong sense of self-discipline to behave more decently; on the other hand, they may, you know, prevent some children from expressing themselves.
问题类型:26(Sentence structure errors)。原因:句子结构混乱,时态和助动词使用错误(can't have → don't have),结尾不完整(keep some children from.)。建议:将句子分为两部分,改正否定结构,补全不完整的短语并使对比连贯。
× For example, one of my English teacher is very responsible while she will guided us to finish our assignments as well as give us tips on our daily habits.
✓ For example, one of my English teachers is very responsible; she guides us to finish our assignments and gives us tips on our daily habits.
问题类型:2(Third person singular issue)。原因:主谓一致与第三人称单数形式错误(one of my English teacher → teachers;is 正确,但 'will guided' 时态和形式错误,应为一般现在 'guides',且动词需要第三人称单数形式)。建议:注意主语复数/单数形式并使用与习惯性动作相匹配的一般现在时态(第三人称单数加 -s)。
× Maybe fewer because as some of the rules can lock over creativity and imagination. I think there may be more own space for us. Can better let us, you know, cherish our own talents and give our own.
✓ Maybe fewer, because some rules can stifle creativity and imagination. I think there might be more personal space for us. That could better allow us to cherish our talents and develop them.
问题类型:11(Incorrect use of prepositions)。原因:错误使用短语(lock over → stifle/limit),缺少冠词和名词搭配(more own space → more personal space),句子残缺(give our own.)。建议:使用恰当动词表达‘抑制’(stifle/limit),使用正确的名词短语并补全句子以表达完整意义。
× Yes I have had one. He has my history teacher in high school and he always set strict rules on his lessons. UH gave out a lot of assignments and will punish the ones who act badly.
✓ Yes, I have had one. He was my history teacher in high school, and he always set strict rules in his lessons. He gave out a lot of assignments and would punish students who behaved badly.
问题类型:12(Incorrect use of pronouns)。原因:人称代词与动词时态不匹配(He has my history teacher → He was my history teacher),以及‘act badly’用法不自然,应为 'behaved badly' 与过去时一致;'UH' 不明且应为 'He'。建议:确保代词指代清楚并与时态一致,使用自然搭配(behave badly)。
× I think for a teacher maybe not because a rule free school will requires teachers to act as the, you know, guided to lead the students to follow the rules. But it will be quite hard and challenging if there are aren't settled rules.
✓ I don't think so. A rule-free school would require teachers to act as guides to lead students to follow the rules, but it would be quite hard and challenging if there aren't settled rules.
问题类型:4(Modal verb usage)。原因:情态动词与主语不一致(will requires → would require;混用 are aren't),词序和双重否定错误(are aren't)。建议:根据假设情境使用条件式(would),修正动词形式,并去掉重复否定,保持句子简洁。