Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答内容完整且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，例如使用“for instance”替代“for example”，并且可以稍微简化句子避免冗长。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school that help students develop good habits and maintain discipline. For instance, students must arrive on time and complete their homework regularly. These rules encourage responsibility and create a positive learning environment.

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词存在错误，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使逻辑更连贯。

Ví dụ: I think it depends on the rules. If the rules are suitable for students' development, they can be beneficial. However, too many strict rules might restrict students' freedom.

Gợi ý: 你的回答内容丰富且表达较好，但“meet the subject”表达不准确，建议使用更合适的短语如“engage with the subject”，并注意句子简洁。

Ví dụ: Definitely. I would recommend my history teacher from junior high school. She is elegant and knowledgeable, and she makes lessons interesting by encouraging us to think from different perspectives. Her teaching style really helps me engage with the subject and understand history better.

× Whether it's good or not it's it's suitable for students development, it will benefit more from world rules, but if not, they will control students.

✓ Whether it's good or not, if it's suitable for students' development, it will benefit more from world rules, but if not, they will control students.

句子中缺少连接词“if”，导致句子结构混乱。应使用“if”引导条件状语从句，明确条件关系。此外，“students development”应为“students' development”，表示所有格。

× Whether it's good or not it's it's suitable for students development, it will benefit more from world rules, but if not, they will control students.

✓ Whether it's good or not, if it's suitable for students' development, it will benefit more from world rules, but if not, they will control students.

“students development”缺少所有格，应为“students' development”，表示“学生的发展”。

× Whether it's good or not it's it's suitable for students development, it will benefit more from world rules, but if not, they will control students.

✓ Whether it's good or not, if it's suitable for students' development, it will benefit more from world rules, but if not, they will control students.

句中“it's it's”重复，应删除多余的“it's”。

× Whether it's good or not it's it's suitable for students development, it will benefit more from world rules, but if not, they will control students.

✓ Whether it's good or not, if it's suitable for students' development, it will benefit more from world rules, but if not, they will control students.

“students development”中“students”应为所有格形式“students'”，表示“学生的”。

× Her teaching style really helps me understand history better and meet the subject.

✓ Her teaching style really helps me understand history better and master the subject.

“meet the subject”用词不当，应使用“master the subject”表示“掌握学科”。