Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. To improve, try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy and organize your ideas logically using linking words. For example, start with a topic sentence, then add specific rules with linking words like 'for example' or 'also'.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, students are not allowed to use laptops or earphones during class time. Also, we can only use phones and earphones during lunch breaks. Additionally, students cannot go to the washroom during classes or exams.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has several grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. To improve, use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary. Also, explain your ideas with specific reasons and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' properly. Avoid confusing words like 'wolves' instead of 'rules'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because teachers can inform parents about students' behavior. This helps students improve themselves and focus more on studying during school hours.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives a clear example but has grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. To improve, use correct subject-verb agreement and complete your thoughts. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details using linking words like 'for example' and 'also'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. For example, her name is Ms. Mary, and she often gives high marks to students. She also stays after school to help us with assessments or topics we don't understand.

× Yes, in my school there are a lot of rules like children cannot use their laptop or earphone in the class times and we can just using the phones and earphones when you have a lunch in the school.

✓ Yes, in my school there are a lot of rules, like children cannot use their laptops or earphones during class time, and we can only use phones and earphones when we have lunch at school.

The original sentence has issues with plural forms ('laptop' and 'earphone' should be plural) and incorrect verb form ('using' should be 'use'). Also, 'class times' is better expressed as 'class time' and 'you have a lunch' should be 'we have lunch' to maintain consistency in pronouns. The phrase 'in the school' is better as 'at school' for natural English usage.

× Also there are a lot of other rules like shoulders, we cannot just go into the washrooms when you're having a class or exam.

✓ Also, there are a lot of other rules, like we cannot go into the washrooms when we are having a class or exam.

The phrase 'like shoulders' is unclear and likely a mistake. The pronoun 'you're' should be 'we are' to maintain consistency. The preposition 'into' is acceptable but 'go to the washrooms' is more common; however, 'go into the washrooms' is not incorrect. The sentence is corrected for clarity and pronoun consistency.

× Yes, I think that children's will be benefit for more wolves because the teachers will tell your families about what behaviour you're doing in the school.

✓ Yes, I think that children will benefit from more rules because the teachers will tell their families about the behavior they are showing at school.

The phrase 'children's will be benefit' is incorrect; 'children will benefit' is correct. 'More wolves' is a mishearing or typo for 'more rules'. The pronouns 'your families' and 'you're doing' should be 'their families' and 'they are showing' to maintain subject consistency. Also, 'behaviour' is spelled in British English; 'behavior' is American English spelling.

× So these rules will be useful for the children to development themselves and study more and learning more in the school time.

✓ So these rules will be useful for the children to develop themselves and to study and learn more during school time.

The verb 'development' is a noun; the correct verb form is 'develop'. The phrase 'study more and learning more' should be parallel: 'study and learn more'. 'In the school time' is better expressed as 'during school time'.

× Yes, there are one teachers that I think that do her job very well.

✓ Yes, there is one teacher that I think does her job very well.

'There are one teachers' is incorrect because 'one' requires singular 'teacher' and singular verb 'is'. Also, 'do' should be 'does' to agree with singular subject 'teacher'.

× Her name was called Mr. Mary and she was a pretty good teacher and she gave a lot of people high Marks and went after the school time.

✓ Her name was Mary, and she was a pretty good teacher. She gave a lot of people high marks and stayed after school hours.

'Her name was called Mr. Mary' is incorrect; 'Mr.' is a male title and 'was called' is awkward. 'Her name was Mary' is correct. 'Went after the school time' is unclear; 'stayed after school hours' is clearer. 'Marks' should not be capitalized.

× She would tell us to go to her room if we need help for our assessment or which part that we don't understand and we.

✓ She would tell us to go to her room if we needed help with our assessments or with any part that we didn't understand.

The sentence is incomplete and has awkward phrasing. 'If we need help for our assessment or which part that we don't understand and we' is ungrammatical. It should be 'if we needed help with our assessments or with any part that we didn't understand.' The verb tense is adjusted to past tense to match 'would tell'.