Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but could be more concise and grammatically accurate. Avoid redundancy and ensure subject-verb agreement, for example, 'which help' should be 'which helps'. Also, finish your sentences clearly and avoid trailing off. Try to use linking words like 'for instance' or 'in addition' to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear a uniform every day, which helps create a sense of unity and discipline. In addition, we are not allowed to use our cell phones during lessons to minimise distractions and stay focused on our studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks structure. Try to respond directly with a clear opinion, followed by reasons or examples. Use simple, complete sentences and avoid hesitation or filler words. For example, start with 'Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because...' and then explain why.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from more rules because clear guidelines help maintain discipline and create a better learning environment. For example, rules about punctuality can encourage students to be on time for classes.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a topic sentence directly answering the question. Use linking words to add details. Also, check your sentence construction and word choice, for example, 'concentrate to the children's studies' is unclear. Try 'She is very kind-hearted and always focuses on helping students with their studies.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I have many teachers, but one who stands out is Ms Amitosh. She is very kind-hearted and always focuses on helping students with their studies. Moreover, she is patient and supportive to everyone in the class.

× For example, students must wear a uniform every day, which help create a sense of unity and discipline.

✓ For example, students must wear a uniform every day, which helps create a sense of unity and discipline.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'wearing a uniform' (singular action), so the verb should be singular 'helps' instead of 'help' to agree with the singular subject.

× Moreover, we are not allowed to use our cell phone during the lesson to minimize the distractions and stay focused on their study or work.

✓ Moreover, we are not allowed to use our cell phones during the lesson to minimize distractions and stay focused on our study or work.

The pronouns should be consistent; 'our' matches the subject 'we'. Also, 'cell phone' should be plural 'cell phones' because it refers to multiple students' phones. 'The distractions' can be simplified to 'distractions' for natural usage.

× We are expected.

✓ We are expected to follow the rules.

The sentence 'We are expected.' is incomplete and lacks an object or complement. Adding 'to follow the rules' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I think yes, shouldn't get a more benefit from like a follow the rules If they follow their rules like the I don't know.

✓ I think yes, students would benefit more if they follow the rules.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Simplifying and restructuring it to 'students would benefit more if they follow the rules' makes the meaning clear and grammatically correct.

× Yes, I have so many teachers but I know the very well her name is Amitosh.

✓ Yes, I have many teachers but I know one very well; her name is Amitosh.

The phrase 'the very well her name is Amitosh' is incorrect. It should be 'one very well; her name is Amitosh' to correctly refer to a specific teacher and separate the clauses.

× She's very kind hearted teacher.

✓ She's a very kind-hearted teacher.

'Kind-hearted' is a compound adjective and should be hyphenated. Also, the article 'a' is needed before 'very kind-hearted teacher'.

× She will always be the concentrate to the children's studies, help to everyone.

✓ She always concentrates on the children's studies and helps everyone.

The phrase 'be the concentrate to' is incorrect. The verb 'concentrate' should be used actively as 'concentrates on'. Also, 'help to everyone' should be 'helps everyone' for correct verb usage and sentence structure.