Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar and vocabulary errors, and it lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms to promote equality and discipline. Additionally, everyone has to follow the school timetable strictly to ensure smooth learning. These rules help create a fair and organised environment for all students.

Gợi ý: Your answer is too brief and lacks supporting details. To improve, give a clear topic sentence and then explain your opinion with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For example, additional rules can ensure fairness among students and prevent misunderstandings. Moreover, clear guidelines help students focus better on their studies and behave responsibly.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammar mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using correct vocabulary and linking words. Avoid repetition and keep your answer natural and concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She is very kind and understands the subjects I find difficult, which helps me learn better. Also, she is always willing to guide and support me whenever I have questions.

× Our student have to wear uniform to maintain equal and disciplined.

✓ Our students have to wear uniforms to maintain equality and discipline.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural verb 'have'. Also, 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' to match the plural subject. 'Equal and disciplined' is incorrect; it should be 'equality and discipline' as these are the correct noun forms to express the intended meaning.

× there are rooms in my school in place for instant.

✓ there are rules in my school in place for instance.

The phrase 'rooms in my school in place for instant' is incorrect. It should be 'rules in my school in place for instance'. 'Rooms' is a wrong word here; 'rules' fits the context. 'Instant' should be 'instance' as in the phrase 'for instance' meaning 'for example'.

× Also they have to adhere to school study time to make sure that.

✓ Also, they have to adhere to the school's study time to make sure of that.

The phrase 'adhere to school study time' is missing the possessive form 'school's' to indicate the study time belonging to the school. Also, 'make sure that' is incomplete; it should be 'make sure of that' to be grammatically correct.

× one of the biggest benefit that rules can provide for them is equal and fair.

✓ one of the biggest benefits that rules can provide for them is equality and fairness.

'Benefit' should be plural 'benefits' because it follows 'one of the biggest'. 'Equal and fair' are adjectives; the correct noun forms 'equality and fairness' should be used here.

× She hates the same regions as me which is really helpful me in processing my study material.

✓ She has the same reasons as me which is really helpful to me in processing my study material.

'Hates' is incorrect; the intended word is 'has'. 'Regions' is incorrect; it should be 'reasons'. Also, 'helpful me' is incorrect; it should be 'helpful to me' to be grammatically correct.

× She's guide and helpful.

✓ She is a guide and helpful.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'guide'. 'She's' is a contraction of 'She is', so it should be 'She is a guide and helpful' to be grammatically correct.