Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are several. Those at my school for example, students are required to wear uniforms every day to maintain and a sense of unity. Also bring friends to classes prohibit because they can easily destroy students and affect their construction during lessons.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I believe students will benefit more from having more rules. For example, wearing uniforms every day help people create a sense of equality among students and reduce distractions. Additionally, clear rules can make school environment safer among organization.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He is my maths teacher and I think he is best hmm because he always explains difficult problems in a simple and clear way. For example, he shows us many easy means to solve complex problems which making learning much more enjoyable.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,例如“Also bring friends to classes prohibit”这句话不符合英语表达习惯,且句子结构混乱。建议加强语法基础,使用更自然的表达方式,并注意句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms every day to promote a sense of unity. Also, bringing friends to class is not allowed because it can distract students and disrupt lessons.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点并给出了理由,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“help people create”应为“helps students create”,“safer among organization”表达不准确。建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配,提升表达准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For example, wearing uniforms helps create a sense of equality among students and reduces distractions. Moreover, clear rules can make the school environment safer and more organized.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答内容具体且表达了观点,但存在语法错误和口语化词汇,如“hmm”和“which making”应改为“which makes”。建议避免口语填充词,注意动词形式,提升语言的正式度和准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He is my math teacher, and I think he is the best because he always explains difficult problems in a simple and clear way. For example, he shows us many easy methods to solve complex problems, which makes learning much more enjoyable.
× Those at my school for example, students are required to wear uniforms every day to maintain and a sense of unity.
✓ Those at my school, for example, students are required to wear uniforms every day to maintain a sense of unity.
句子中“and a sense of unity”中的“and”多余,应去掉,保持句子通顺。这里属于句子结构错误,调整后更符合英语表达习惯。
× Also bring friends to classes prohibit because they can easily destroy students and affect their construction during lessons.
✓ Also, bringing friends to classes is prohibited because they can easily distract students and affect their concentration during lessons.
原句中“bring friends to classes prohibit”结构错误,应该用动名词形式“bringing”作主语,且“prohibit”应改为被动语态“is prohibited”。另外,“destroy students”用词不当,应为“distract students”(分散注意力),“construction”应为“concentration”(专注)。
× For example, wearing uniforms every day help people create a sense of equality among students and reduce distractions.
✓ For example, wearing uniforms every day helps people create a sense of equality among students and reduce distractions.
主语“wearing uniforms every day”是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”,这是主谓一致问题。
× Additionally, clear rules can make school environment safer among organization.
✓ Additionally, clear rules can make the school environment safer and more organized.
原句中“safer among organization”表达不正确,应改为“safer and more organized”来表达“更安全且更有组织”的意思。
× For example, he shows us many easy means to solve complex problems which making learning much more enjoyable.
✓ For example, he shows us many easy means to solve complex problems which make learning much more enjoyable.
关系代词“which”指代复数“many easy means”,谓语动词应使用复数形式“make”,而不是“making”。