Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, at school how many rules example don't use phone and must wear uniform and can't smoking.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think students, uh, benefit more from more rulers because.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
My English teacher is very good. He's very kind and he's very helpful. He is good, good everyone and he teach us how many words, sentences and how many.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答缺乏语法正确性和连贯性,句子结构不完整,且表达不够清晰。建议你在回答时使用完整的句子,明确列举规则,并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use their phones during class, they must wear uniforms, and smoking is strictly prohibited.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你的回答不完整,缺少理由和详细说明,且有语音停顿。建议你在回答时给出明确的观点,并用具体的理由支持,同时避免语音停顿。
Ví dụ: I think students would benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help maintain discipline and create a better learning environment.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够流畅,句子重复且不完整,缺乏具体细节。建议你用完整的句子描述老师的优点,并举例说明他如何帮助你们学习。
Ví dụ: Yes, my English teacher is excellent. He is very kind and helpful. For example, he teaches us new vocabulary and sentence structures, which greatly improves our English skills.
× Yes, at school how many rules example don't use phone and must wear uniform and can't smoking.
✓ Yes, at school there are many rules, for example, don't use phones, must wear uniforms, and can't smoke.
原句中“rules”后缺少动词,且“phone”和“uniform”应使用复数形式,因为指的是一般规则中的多项内容。应使用“There are”结构来表达“有很多规则”。此外,“can't smoking”应改为“can't smoke”,动词形式错误。
× Yes, at school how many rules example don't use phone and must wear uniform and can't smoking.
✓ Yes, at school there are many rules, for example, you must not use phones, must wear uniforms, and can't smoke.
原句中“must wear uniform”缺少主语,且“must”作为情态动词后应直接跟动词原形。建议加上主语“you”使句子完整。
× I think students, uh, benefit more from more rulers because.
✓ I think students would benefit more from more rules because...
原句中“rulers”应为“rules”,且表达假设或推测时应使用情态动词“would”。
× I think students, uh, benefit more from more rulers because.
✓ I think students would benefit more from more rules because...
“rulers”是“统治者”的意思,错误地使用了复数形式,应为“rules”(规则)。
× He is good, good everyone and he teach us how many words, sentences and how many.
✓ He is good to everyone and he teaches us many words, sentences, and more.
主语是第三人称单数“he”,动词“teach”应加-s变为“teaches”。此外,“good good everyone”表达不清,改为“good to everyone”更自然。