Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "get enter" and "UH starting time." To improve, use clearer and more natural expressions, and avoid redundancy. Also, try to keep your answer concise and within five sentences. Using linking words can help your answer flow better.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must arrive before 8:30 a.m. because classes start promptly at that time. Additionally, during break periods, students are expected to finish their lunch on time to avoid delays. These rules help maintain order and ensure everyone follows the schedule.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete, with filler words like "umm" and an unfinished thought at the end. To improve, try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid fillers, and complete your sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because they help us manage our time effectively. For instance, clear guidelines encourage students to focus on learning and balance their daily activities. Therefore, having more rules can create a better learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer provides relevant information but has grammatical mistakes and incomplete sentences, such as "she arrive" and the unfinished last sentence. To improve, use correct verb forms, complete your thoughts, and connect your ideas smoothly with linking words. Also, try to expand your answer with specific examples or reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a history teacher who does her job very well. She is always punctual and arrives on time for every class. Moreover, she manages to complete the entire syllabus within the allotted time. Additionally, she often uses extra time to help students prepare for exams, which I really appreciate.

× Yes, of course there is a variety of rules in my school for students.

✓ Yes, of course there are a variety of rules in my school for students.

The subject 'a variety of rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× we have to get enter on time because the UH starting time of the school is 830

✓ we have to enter on time because the starting time of the school is 8:30

The phrase 'get enter' is incorrect; 'enter' should be used alone as the verb. Also, 'UH' seems unnecessary and '830' should be written as '8:30' for clarity.

× during UH break period they should have to finish their lunch on time.

✓ during the break period, they have to finish their lunch on time.

The phrase 'have to finish' is correct, but 'should have to' is redundant and incorrect. Also, 'UH' is unclear and should be omitted or clarified. Adding 'the' before 'break period' is necessary.

× rules are playing essential role in every student's life

✓ rules play an essential role in every student's life

The verb 'play' should be in simple present tense to express a general truth, not 'are playing' which is present continuous.

× because the students umm know how to manage umm, their time properly to learn new things in the school or how they manage their whole day with so many things and.

✓ because students know how to manage their time properly to learn new things at school and how they manage their whole day with many activities.

The phrase is informal with filler words 'umm' and ends abruptly. 'The students' can be simplified to 'students'. 'In the school' is better as 'at school'. The sentence should be completed for clarity.

× She arrive on time and she's tried to finish the whole syllabus in given time.

✓ She arrives on time and tries to finish the whole syllabus in the given time.

The verb 'arrive' should be 'arrives' to agree with the third person singular subject 'she'. 'She's tried' is incorrect here; 'she tries' fits better to indicate habitual action.