Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“many different kinds of use”应为“many different kinds of rules”，且句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇表达，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms during classes, and mobile phones are not allowed to be used in the classroom.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“plus more routes”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students. They need more free time to do things they enjoy because too many rules can increase stress and make them feel restricted.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“help people to improve their ability to her class”表达不清。建议简化句子，使用正确的语法和词汇，并增加细节使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher named Mary at my university. She is excellent at her job and helps students improve their skills during her classes.

× There are many different kinds of use for students at my school.

✓ There are many different kinds of rules for students at my school.

这里的 'use' 应该是复数形式的名词 'rules'，因为句子想表达的是学校对学生的多种规定。'use' 作为名词通常指用途，不符合语境。

× we must wear uniform during the class and the phone.

✓ we must wear uniforms during class and cannot use phones.

'wear uniform during the class and the phone' 结构不正确，'uniform' 应为复数 'uniforms'，'during the class' 应简化为 'during class'，且 'and the phone' 语义不通，应改为 'cannot use phones'。

× The mobile phones are not allowed to use in class.

✓ Mobile phones are not allowed to be used in class.

'allowed to use' 结构错误，应该是被动语态 'allowed to be used'，表示手机不被允许在课堂上使用。

× I think students need to have more time to do something which they like to do, plus more routes.

✓ I think students need to have more time to do things they like to do, plus more rules.

'routes' 应为 'rules'，因为上下文谈论的是学校规定，而非路线。

× Maybe 'cause some negative consequence for people because it may be enhanced their sense of stress and restricted.

✓ Maybe it causes some negative consequences for people because it may enhance their sense of stress and restriction.

句子结构混乱，'cause' 应为 'causes'，'consequence' 应为复数 'consequences'，'enhanced' 应为动词原形 'enhance'，'restricted' 应改为名词 'restriction'。

× Speaking of that, I must say Mary who is one of my university teacher, she is very good.

✓ Speaking of that, I must say Mary, who is one of my university teachers, is very good.

'teacher' 应为复数 'teachers'，且句中不应重复使用主语 'she'，应合并为一个完整句子。

× She does her job very well and she also help people to improve their ability to her class during the class.

✓ She does her job very well and she also helps people improve their abilities in her class.

'help' 应为第三人称单数形式 'helps'，'improve their ability to her class' 结构错误，应改为 'improve their abilities in her class'。