Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's, but it's general.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, it can make people or it can make students orderly.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, my PE teacher.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,并具体说明学校的规则内容,避免模糊和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school, such as wearing uniforms and being punctual for classes.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简单且表达不流畅。建议使用连词连接观点,并具体说明规则如何帮助学生变得有序。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules would help students become more disciplined and maintain order in the school environment.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节。建议补充说明老师做得好的具体方面,并使用连词丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, my PE teacher is very dedicated and always encourages us to stay active and healthy, which makes classes enjoyable.
× Yes, it's, but it's general.
✓ Yes, there are, but they are general.
原句结构不完整,缺少主语和谓语,且使用了错误的代词“it's”。应使用“There are”来表示“有”,并且复数形式“they”指代“rules”。建议改为“Yes, there are, but they are general.”以符合英语句子结构。
× Yes, it can make people or it can make students orderly.
✓ Yes, it can make people, or it can make students orderly.
原句中“it”指代不明确,且句子连接不够清晰。虽然语法上没有大错,但为了表达更清楚,建议在“people”和“or”之间加逗号,明确分隔两个并列部分。
× Yes, my PE teacher.
✓ Yes, I have a PE teacher who does his job very well.
回答不完整,缺少谓语动词,且未完整回答问题。应补充完整句子,明确主语和谓语,使句子完整且符合语法。