Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must not be late for lessons, complete assignments before class, and turn off the lights in the dormitory by 11 pm.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰，语法和用词有误，建议使用更准确的句子结构和词汇，并用连接词使观点更连贯。

Ví dụ: I believe students benefit from reasonable rules because they help us develop good habits. For instance, rules about punctuality prepare us for future responsibilities.

Gợi ý: 回答中有较多语法错误和重复，表达不清晰，建议简化句子，避免重复，并用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I have a teacher who teaches landscape history. He is very humorous and uses funny stories to explain concepts. Because of his teaching style, I enjoy attending his classes.

× Yes, there are many rules for students at my school, for example, and the students have cannot cannot be late for lessons and we have to finish our assignment before the classes and at the dormitory we have to turn off the lights at at by 11.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, students cannot be late for lessons, and we have to finish our assignments before the classes. At the dormitory, we have to turn off the lights by 11.

原句中“assignment”应为复数形式“assignments”，因为指的是多项作业。英语中可数名词在表示多个时需用复数形式。

× Yes, there are many rules for students at my school, for example, and the students have cannot cannot be late for lessons and we have to finish our assignment before the classes and at the dormitory we have to turn off the lights at at by 11.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, students cannot be late for lessons, and we have to finish our assignments before the classes. At the dormitory, we have to turn off the lights by 11.

原句中“have cannot cannot be late”结构错误，正确表达应为“cannot be late”，即使用情态动词“cannot”表示禁止。

× Yes, there are many rules for students at my school, for example, and the students have cannot cannot be late for lessons and we have to finish our assignment before the classes and at the dormitory we have to turn off the lights at at by 11.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at my school. For example, students cannot be late for lessons, and we have to finish our assignments before the classes. At the dormitory, we have to turn off the lights by 11.

原句连接词使用混乱，句子过长且重复，导致结构混乱。应拆分为多个简洁句子，逻辑更清晰。

× I believe students could benefit from the rules as the rules are reasonable but not too strict. Strict such as the rules about the don't be late can make us good for our future.

✓ I believe students could benefit from the rules as the rules are reasonable but not too strict. Strict rules, such as those about not being late, can be good for our future.

原句中“the don't be late”表达不正确，情态动词和否定形式使用错误，应改为“rules about not being late”。

× I have a teacher who is teaching our land the history of landscape.

✓ I have a teacher who is teaching us the history of our land's landscape.

原句中“teaching our land the history of landscape”表达不清，缺少宾语“us”，且“landscape”前应加定冠词或所有格。

× He's very humorous. He tell the he he teach teach us websters with with humor funny stories.

✓ He's very humorous. He tells us Webster's with humorous and funny stories.

主语为第三人称单数时，动词应加-s，原句中“tell”应为“tells”，“teach”重复且用法错误，应简化为“tells us”。

× Because of his of his teaching style, I like go to the class.

✓ Because of his teaching style, I like going to the class.

原句中“like go”结构错误，动词“like”后应接动名词“going”表示喜欢做某事。