Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and completeness. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific examples with clear linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school to maintain discipline. For example, students must return to class promptly after breaks. These rules help ensure a focused learning environment and allow everyone to make good progress.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses a clear opinion and reasoning, which is good. However, try to use linking words to connect your ideas more smoothly and provide a more balanced view or examples. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'do as they want' and be more specific.

Ví dụ: I believe that adding more rules might hinder students' creativity because strict limitations can prevent them from exploring their talents. Therefore, instead of imposing too many restrictions, schools should encourage freedom within reasonable boundaries to foster personal growth.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Make sure to finish your sentences and provide specific details about why you liked the teacher. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague expressions. Keep your answer concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a physics teacher in 10th grade who did his job very well. He made lessons interesting by using creative methods; for instance, he once dressed up as Euclid, the father of geometry, to help us understand the concepts better. This approach made learning enjoyable and memorable.

× Well absolutely, as you know every school needs some sort of rules to keep order in the school and to make good progress with their students learnings.

✓ Well absolutely, as you know every school needs some sort of rules to keep order in the school and to make good progress with their students' learning.

The word 'learnings' is incorrect here; the correct noun form is 'learning' when referring to knowledge acquired. Also, 'students' learning' requires a possessive apostrophe to indicate that the learning belongs to the students.

× So yes we also had rules such as rules to get back to class early after the.

✓ So yes, we also had rules such as rules to get back to class early after breaks.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'after the'. Adding 'breaks' completes the sentence logically. Also, a comma after 'So yes' improves readability.

× If they're so limited, it's better that they be left alone and do as they want.

✓ If they're so limited, it's better that they be left alone and allowed to do as they want.

The phrase 'do as they want' is awkward here. Using 'allowed to do as they want' clarifies permission and improves grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I remember when I was at my 10th grade, I had a physics teacher and I really liked him because he improvised in his educating system.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was in 10th grade, I had a physics teacher and I really liked him because he improvised in his teaching system.

The phrase 'at my 10th grade' should be 'in 10th grade' for correct preposition use. Also, 'educating system' is incorrect; the correct term is 'teaching system'.

× And I remember one time he dressed as the Euclidean geometric discoverer.

✓ And I remember one time he dressed as the discoverer of Euclidean geometry.

The phrase 'Euclidean geometric discoverer' is awkward and unclear. Reordering to 'discoverer of Euclidean geometry' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× He was like him and it.

✓ He looked just like him.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'He looked just like him' clearly expresses the intended meaning that the teacher resembled the discoverer.