Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. At my school we have quite a few rules. For example, our students are required to wear uniforms, arrive on time and maintain discipline in class. Or using phones during our lessons is strictly prohibited and we expected to show respect to our teachers and peers.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I think not necessarily. Too many rules can actually backfire and make students feel restricted. Or what matters more is having clear, reasonable guidelines that help create a positive learning environment. Students benefit most when rules are fair, consistently enforced.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, my English teacher is truly inspiring. She's not only knowledgeable, but also very engaging and patient. She uses a variety of creative teaching methods to make the lessons fun and interactive, and she always encourages us to think critically.
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách tránh sử dụng từ nối không phù hợp như "Or" ở đầu câu và làm cho câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng các từ nối phù hợp như "For example" hoặc "Additionally" để liên kết các ý một cách tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. At my school, we have several rules. For example, students are required to wear uniforms, arrive on time, and maintain discipline in class. Additionally, using phones during lessons is strictly prohibited, and we are expected to show respect to our teachers and peers.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh bắt đầu câu bằng "Or" vì nó không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Thay vào đó, hãy sử dụng các từ nối như "However" hoặc "What matters more is" để câu trả lời trở nên tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể mở rộng thêm một chút về lý do tại sao các quy tắc rõ ràng lại quan trọng.
Ví dụ: I don't think more rules are always better. Too many rules can backfire and make students feel restricted. However, what matters more is having clear and reasonable guidelines that create a positive learning environment. Students benefit most when rules are fair and consistently enforced.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn rất tốt, tự nhiên và có cấu trúc rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về một phương pháp giảng dạy sáng tạo mà cô giáo sử dụng để làm câu trả lời thêm sinh động và thuyết phục hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, my English teacher is truly inspiring. She's not only knowledgeable but also very engaging and patient. For example, she often uses role-playing activities to make lessons fun and interactive. She always encourages us to think critically and express our own opinions.
Ngữ pháp
× Or using phones during our lessons is strictly prohibited and we expected to show respect to our teachers and peers.
✓ Using phones during our lessons is strictly prohibited and we are expected to show respect to our teachers and peers.
The phrase 'we expected' is incorrect because it uses the simple past tense 'expected' instead of the present passive form 'are expected'. The sentence requires the present passive voice to indicate an ongoing expectation. Therefore, 'we expected' should be corrected to 'we are expected'.
× Or what matters more is having clear, reasonable guidelines that help create a positive learning environment.
✓ What matters more is having clear, reasonable guidelines that help create a positive learning environment.
Starting the sentence with 'Or' is inappropriate here as it creates a sentence fragment and disrupts the flow. The sentence should begin directly with 'What matters more' to maintain proper sentence structure and clarity.
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