Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, my school has many rules to ensure a good learning environment.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I've seen many rules can improve students study level.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I have a teacher who is very distinct. I always explain things cleverly. For example, my maths teacher made many.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短,缺少具体细节和连接词。建议增加具体的规则内容,并用连接词丰富句子,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, my school has many rules to ensure a good learning environment. For example, students must arrive on time and respect each other, which helps maintain discipline and focus.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子,增加具体理由,并用连接词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe that having more rules can help students improve their study habits because clear guidelines encourage better discipline and focus.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱,语法和表达错误严重,缺少具体细节和逻辑。建议重组答案,明确表达老师的优点,并举具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. For instance, my maths teacher explains difficult concepts clearly and uses interesting examples to help us understand better.
× Yes, I've seen many rules can improve students study level.
✓ Yes, I've seen many rules can improve students' study levels.
这里'students study level'缺少所有格,应该是'students' study levels',表示学生们的学习水平。'students'是复数所有格,'study levels'表示多个学生的学习水平。
× Yes I do. I have a teacher who is very distinct. I always explain things cleverly.
✓ Yes I do. I have a teacher who is very distinct. He always explains things cleverly.
句子中'I always explain things cleverly'与上下文不符,应该是老师解释而不是学生自己。需要用第三人称代词'He'并且动词用第三人称单数形式'explains'。
× For example, my maths teacher made many.
✓ For example, my maths teacher made many explanations.
句子不完整,'made many'后面缺少宾语,导致句子结构错误。需要补充宾语,如'explanations',使句子完整。