Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Of course, there are indeed a lot of rules for students at my school, especially in the classroom. For instance, students are not allowed to be late for the class because punctuality is very important for maintaining order and ensuring everyone can learn effectively.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Well, I don't think students would benefit more from many rules because many restrictions would limit their creativity. Each student is unique, right? And creativity is essential for developing critical thinking.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Well, I did have a teacher who perform especially well. She's very passionate and dedicated to teaching, and she is also very kind and supportive to us. For example, whenever we got into trouble, she is always willing to assist us and patiently help helps us understand.
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Part 1
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容具体，但句子较长且略显冗余。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达，同时可以增加更多具体细节使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must arrive on time to class to keep order and help everyone learn better. Also, wearing the school uniform is mandatory to promote equality among students.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答观点明确，但部分句子口语化且不够连贯。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时提供更具体的理由或例子支持观点。
Ví dụ: I don't believe adding more rules would help students. Too many restrictions can stifle creativity, which is important for critical thinking. For instance, when students have freedom, they can explore new ideas and solve problems better.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误（如动词形式错误），且部分表达重复。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a teacher who performed exceptionally well. She was passionate and dedicated, always kind and supportive. For example, whenever we faced difficulties, she patiently helped us understand the material and offered extra assistance.
Ngữ pháp
× Well, I did have a teacher who perform especially well.
✓ Well, I did have a teacher who performed especially well.
这里使用了过去时态'did have'，所以后面的动词也应该用过去式。'perform'应改为'performed'以保持时态一致。
× She's very passionate and dedicated to teaching, and she is also very kind and supportive to us.
✓ She's very passionate and dedicated to teaching, and she is also very kind and supportive to us.
该句无第三人称单数动词错误，保持原句。
× For example, whenever we got into trouble, she is always willing to assist us and patiently help helps us understand.
✓ For example, whenever we got into trouble, she was always willing to assist us and patiently helped us understand.
前半句使用了过去时态'got into trouble'，后半句应保持时态一致，动词'is'和'helps'应改为过去式'was'和'helped'。
× For example, whenever we got into trouble, she is always willing to assist us and patiently help helps us understand.
✓ For example, whenever we got into trouble, she is always willing to assist us and patiently helps us understand.
如果保持现在时态，动词'help'应加s变为'helps'以符合第三人称单数形式。
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