Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by combining related ideas smoothly and check grammar, such as 'the use of mobile phones is not allowed' instead of 'in addition to the use of mobile phones is not allowed'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must wear uniforms during school hours, and mobile phone use is prohibited in class to help us concentrate and avoid distractions.

Gợi ý: Your answer repeats ideas from the previous question and contains a typo ('roles' instead of 'rules'). To improve, provide new, specific reasons or examples and use correct vocabulary. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repeating the same points.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules could help students. For example, stricter homework policies might encourage better study habits, and clear guidelines on classroom behavior can create a more respectful learning environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical errors and lacks smooth linking. For example, 'teacher are' should be 'teachers are', and 'providing' should be 'provide'. Also, avoid short, choppy sentences by using linking words to connect ideas naturally.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have several teachers who do their jobs very well. For instance, my math, physics, and native language teachers provide presentations and other resources to improve our knowledge. Moreover, they encourage us to achieve better marks and support us during conferences.

× For example, students are required to wear uniforms during school hours, in addition to the use of mobile phones is not allowed during classes to help students concentrate better and avoid distractions.

✓ For example, students are required to wear uniforms during school hours, and the use of mobile phones is not allowed during classes to help students concentrate better and avoid distractions.

The original sentence incorrectly combines two clauses with 'in addition to' which is not suitable here. The phrase 'in addition to' is typically followed by a noun or noun phrase, not a clause. Using 'and' correctly connects the two independent clauses, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yes, I think students would benefit from having more roles in schools.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit from having more rules in schools.

The word 'roles' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is 'rules'. 'Roles' refers to parts or functions people have, while 'rules' are regulations or guidelines, which fits the context of school regulations.

× Moreover, when the use of mobile phones are forbidden during lessons, it will help students to concentrate better and avoid distractions.

✓ Moreover, when the use of mobile phones is forbidden during lessons, it will help students to concentrate better and avoid distractions.

The subject 'the use' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to agree in number with the singular subject.

× For example, my math, physics, and native language teacher are trying their best to improve our knowledge and providing presentations and other resources.

✓ For example, my math, physics, and native language teachers are trying their best to improve our knowledge and provide presentations and other resources.

Since the student refers to multiple subjects (math, physics, native language), the noun 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers'. Also, 'providing' should be changed to 'provide' to maintain parallel structure with 'are trying'.

× my math, physics, and native language teacher are trying their best to improve our knowledge and providing presentations and other resources.

✓ my math, physics, and native language teachers are trying their best to improve our knowledge and provide presentations and other resources.

After 'are trying', the verb should be in base form 'provide' to maintain parallelism with 'improve'. Using 'providing' is incorrect here because it breaks the parallel verb structure.

× And finally, they help us in conferences.

✓ Finally, they help us during conferences.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is generally informal and unnecessary here. Also, 'in conferences' is less natural than 'during conferences' to indicate the time when help is provided.