Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и естественным. Избегайте повторений и неоконченных предложений. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и конкретизируйте детали.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. For instance, all students must wear a uniform, which includes a suit and proper shoes. Additionally, there is a strict dress code to maintain discipline and unity among pupils.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много пауз и нечетких выражений. Следует говорить более уверенно, использовать связующие слова и конкретные примеры, чтобы сделать ответ более понятным и логичным.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For example, strict regulations can discourage bad behavior and encourage students to follow school policies, which helps them develop discipline and succeed in life.

Gợi ý: Ответ содержит много повторений и грамматических ошибок. Следует строить предложения более плавно, избегать повторов и использовать правильные слова и выражения.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have an excellent teacher, my English teacher. He teaches very effectively and helped me prepare for the IELTS exam step by step. Because of his guidance, I improved a lot, and I really appreciate his support.

× Yes, there are many rules for students at our schools.

✓ Yes, there are many rules for students at our school.

The word 'schools' is plural, but the context suggests referring to a single school. Using the singular 'school' matches the context and maintains subject-verb agreement.

× they must have a suit and a shoe and.

✓ they must have a suit and shoes.

The phrase 'a suit and a shoe' is inconsistent because 'suit' is singular and 'shoe' should be plural to refer to both feet. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' Correcting to 'a suit and shoes' is grammatically correct and clearer.

× there are some bad students who don't do anything, but if there are some, there are several rules at school.

✓ there are some bad students who don't do anything, but if there are several rules at school,

The phrase 'if there are some' is vague and unclear. Replacing 'some' with 'several rules at school' clarifies the meaning and corrects the pronoun usage.

× They can be afraid of them and they can follow the structures and it can help them to do well in their life.

✓ They can be afraid of the rules and can follow the structure, which can help them do well in their lives.

The pronouns 'them' and 'it' are ambiguous. Replacing 'them' with 'the rules' and 'it' with 'which' clarifies the sentence. Also, 'structures' should be singular 'structure' to match the intended meaning, and 'life' should be plural 'lives' when referring to multiple students.

× He has, he's a, he's a very great teacher because he's teaching us very well.

✓ He is a very great teacher because he teaches us very well.

The original sentence has redundant phrases and awkward pronoun usage. Simplifying to 'He is a very great teacher because he teaches us very well' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I went to him to prepare for the ice and he taught me how to be prepared step by step to the eyes.

✓ I went to him to prepare for the IELTS, and he taught me how to prepare step by step for the exam.

The phrase 'prepare for the ice' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'IELTS' (an English test). Also, 'prepared step by step to the eyes' is incorrect; it should be 'prepare step by step for the exam.' Correcting prepositions and terms clarifies the meaning.