Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are a lot of rules such as we can't use teachers stairs and we come to teachers food areas. We can't read books in the teachers area. But this all depends on teachers, right?
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think only depending on roads we can prove our live environment and we can focus on people's rights. So I think we must have rules to develop our.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a teacher named Lily and she was my best favorite English teacher. She always do her job very carefully so I love her very much.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,例如“teachers stairs”和“teachers food areas”表达不准确,且句子结构混乱。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构,避免重复和不必要的内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to use the teachers' stairs or enter the teachers' dining areas. Also, reading books is not permitted in those areas. These rules help maintain order and respect for teachers' spaces.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答内容不够清晰,句子结构混乱,表达的意思难以理解。建议在回答时直接表达观点,并用具体理由支持,同时注意语法和词汇的准确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe having more rules can help students live in a better environment. Rules protect people's rights and ensure everyone behaves properly, which is important for our development.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在时态错误和语法问题,如“she was”和“she always do”。建议使用正确的时态和主谓一致,同时丰富细节,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher named Lily who is my favorite English teacher. She always does her job carefully and patiently, which makes learning enjoyable for me.
× Yes, there are a lot of rules such as we can't use teachers stairs and we come to teachers food areas.
✓ Yes, there are a lot of rules such as we can't use teachers' stairs and we can't come to teachers' food areas.
这里的teachers是复数所有格,表示“老师们的”,需要加撇号表示所有格。
× we come to teachers food areas.
✓ we can't come to teachers' food areas.
句中缺少否定助动词can't,且动词用法错误,应为“不能进入老师的食物区域”。
× We can't read books in the teachers area.
✓ We can't read books in the teachers' area.
teachers是复数所有格,表示“老师们的”,需要加撇号。
× But this all depends on teachers, right?
✓ But this all depends on the teachers, right?
此处需要加定冠词the,表示特指老师们。
× Yes, I think only depending on roads we can prove our live environment and we can focus on people's rights.
✓ Yes, I think only depending on rules we can improve our living environment and we can focus on people's rights.
原句中roads应为rules,live environment应为living environment,表示“生活环境”。
× Yes, I think only depending on roads we can prove our live environment and we can focus on people's rights.
✓ Yes, I think only depending on rules we can improve our living environment and we can focus on people's rights.
prove用法错误,应为improve,表示“改善”;live应为living,作为形容词修饰environment。
× So I think we must have rules to develop our.
✓ So I think we must have rules to develop ourselves.
句子不完整,缺少宾语,develop后应接反身代词ourselves。
× She always do her job very carefully so I love her very much.
✓ She always does her job very carefully so I love her very much.
主语是第三人称单数she,谓语动词do应加s变为does,表示一般现在时。