Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are concise. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school because students come from different places. Therefore, the rules help maintain good behaviour. For example, all students must wear the same uniform to promote equality.

Gợi ý: Focus on using clearer and more natural expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific examples. Also, check your grammar and word choice to make your answer more effective and easier to understand.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because they encourage good behaviour. For instance, rules about punctuality help students develop the habit of being on time, which is useful for their future careers.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more direct and structured by starting with a clear topic sentence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific examples. Also, improve grammar and vocabulary to sound more natural and clear.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had many teachers who did their jobs very well because they acted as role models. For example, my teachers always arrived at school early to prepare lessons for the next day, which showed their dedication.

× Yet there are many rules in my school because in my school there are many students come from different places.

✓ Yet there are many rules in my school because many students come from different places.

The phrase 'there are many students come from different places' is incorrect because 'there are' should not be followed directly by a verb without a relative pronoun or conjunction. The correct structure is 'many students come from different places' without 'there are' before it.

× So the law must control the student to follow behavior in the school.

✓ So the rules must control the students to follow the behavior in the school.

The word 'law' is inappropriate here; 'rules' fits better in a school context. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. Additionally, 'follow behavior' is awkward; it should be 'follow the behavior' or better 'follow the rules' or 'behave properly'.

× For example the student should be wearing same uniform.

✓ For example, the students should be wearing the same uniform.

The sentence lacks the definite article 'the' before 'same uniform'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the general statement. A comma is needed after 'For example'.

× Yes, there are many benefits for students following the rule because the rules are designed for the good thing.

✓ Yes, there are many benefits for students following the rules because the rules are designed for good things.

'The rule' should be plural 'the rules' to match the context. Also, 'for the good thing' is incorrect; it should be 'for good things' or 'for the good of students'.

× So if students follow the rule, that means students behave on the rising.

✓ So if students follow the rules, that means students behave well.

'Follow the rule' should be plural 'rules'. The phrase 'behave on the rising' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'behave well' or 'behave properly'.

× For example, the student should become on time the school to practice to be on time in the future.

✓ For example, the students should arrive on time at school to practice being punctual in the future.

'Become on time the school' is incorrect. The correct prepositions are 'arrive on time at school'. Also, 'practice to be on time' should be 'practice being punctual' or 'practice arriving on time'.

× Well, when I was a student, I had many teachers to do well because the teacher should be a role model for a student to show they have a good behalf.

✓ Well, when I was a student, I had many teachers who did well because the teachers should be role models for students to show they have good behaviour.

'Teachers to do well' is incorrect; it should be 'teachers who did well' to indicate past tense and relative clause. 'A student' should be plural 'students' to match the context. 'Good behalf' is incorrect; the correct word is 'good behaviour'.

× For example, my teacher they always come to school before a student and prepare the reason for the next day.

✓ For example, my teachers always come to school before the students and prepare the lessons for the next day.

'My teacher they' is incorrect; it should be 'my teachers' or 'they'. 'Before a student' should be 'before the students' to indicate plural and definite group. 'Prepare the reason' is incorrect; it should be 'prepare the lessons' or 'prepare materials'.