Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Well there are many rules in my school because many students have come from different players that the school should be have the rule to control the student. For example, my school have a rule for the uniform the student should be.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think there are many benefits for the student to follow the rule because the rule to control the student to do the same thing every day, to practice to practice the student. For example, in my school the student should become on time to practicing.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have AT Shirt to do his job very well. Many many my teacher, they have a good job for the teach the student. For example the teacher in my school, they are always prepared for teaching every month.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more natural. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then provide specific examples. Avoid grammatical errors and incomplete sentences. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school to ensure discipline. For instance, all students must wear a uniform every day to maintain a sense of unity and equality.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer should be more structured and clear. Start with a direct response, then explain your reasons using linking words. Also, use correct grammar and vocabulary to express your ideas effectively.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from having more rules because they help develop good habits. For example, at my school, students are required to arrive on time for practice, which teaches punctuality and discipline.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly identify the teacher and explain why they do their job well, using specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid repetition.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher named Mr. Smith who does his job very well. For example, he is always well-prepared for lessons and uses interesting materials to help students understand the topics better.
× Well there are many rules in my school because many students have come from different players that the school should be have the rule to control the student.
✓ Well, there are many rules in my school because many students have come from different places, so the school should have rules to control the students.
The word 'players' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'places' to indicate different locations. Also, 'should be have' is incorrect; it should be 'should have'. Additionally, 'the rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the context of multiple regulations, and 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural subject.
× For example, my school have a rule for the uniform the student should be.
✓ For example, my school has a rule about the uniform that the students should follow.
The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'my school' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'the student' should be plural 'the students' to refer to all students. The sentence structure is incomplete and needs clarification.
× Yes, I think there are many benefits for the student to follow the rule because the rule to control the student to do the same thing every day, to practice to practice the student.
✓ Yes, I think there are many benefits for the students to follow the rules because the rules help control the students to do the same thing every day, to practice.
'Student' should be plural 'students' to refer to all students. 'Rule' should be plural 'rules' to match the context. The phrase 'to practice to practice the student' is unclear and redundant; it is corrected to 'to practice' for clarity.
× For example, in my school the student should become on time to practicing.
✓ For example, in my school, the students should be on time for practicing.
'Become on time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'be on time'. Also, 'to practicing' should be 'for practicing' to use the correct preposition with the gerund.
× Yes, I have AT Shirt to do his job very well.
✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well.
'AT Shirt' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it should be 'a teacher'. The pronoun 'his' is correct if referring to a male teacher, but the noun needs correction.
× Many many my teacher, they have a good job for the teach the student.
✓ Many of my teachers do a good job teaching the students.
'Many many my teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'Many of my teachers'. 'They have a good job for the teach the student' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'do a good job teaching the students' for clarity and correct verb usage.
× For example the teacher in my school, they are always prepared for teaching every month.
✓ For example, the teachers in my school are always prepared to teach every month.
'Prepared for teaching' is less common; 'prepared to teach' is more natural. Also, 'the teacher' should be plural 'the teachers' to agree with 'they'. The phrase 'every month' is acceptable but may be better clarified depending on context.