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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

There are so many rules in my dorm. I'm really annoying the rules because some rules really take the cake. It's ridiculous. You must close the close down the light before 10:00 PM and you must don't smoking at the bathroom.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

I don't think students benefit from the morals because I don't I can't do something through my idea and some rules is not right. Who who think that there's 100% rise?

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Thí sinh

Yeah, so my teacher did to his job very well and they always take care about the students. They always, they always ask our advice or our suggestion and and always give me some.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“I'm really annoying the rules”应为“I am really annoyed by the rules”。建议你使用更准确的表达,并避免重复和冗余,同时注意句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: There are many rules in my dormitory, and I find some of them quite annoying. For example, we have to turn off the lights before 10:00 PM, and smoking is strictly prohibited in the bathroom.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰,语法和表达混乱,导致意思难以理解。建议你直接回答问题,使用简单明了的句子,并提供具体理由支持你的观点。

Ví dụ: I don't think students would benefit from having more rules because too many rules can limit our freedom. Some rules are unnecessary and make it hard to express our own ideas.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在时态错误和语法问题,例如“did to his job”应为“does his job”。建议你使用正确的时态和更连贯的句子结构,同时避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He always takes good care of the students and often asks for our advice and suggestions.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I'm really annoying the rules because some rules really take the cake.

I'm really annoyed by the rules because some rules really take the cake.

这里动词 'annoying' 用错了,应该用过去分词 'annoyed' 来表示被动的感受。'annoying' 是现在分词,表示主动的动作。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× You must close the close down the light before 10:00 PM and you must don't smoking at the bathroom.

You must turn off the light before 10:00 PM and you must not smoke in the bathroom.

句子中 'close the close down the light' 表达不正确,正确表达是 'turn off the light'。此外,'must don't smoking' 语法错误,正确用法是 'must not smoke'。介词 'at the bathroom' 应改为 'in the bathroom'。

Modal verb usage

× I don't think students benefit from the morals because I don't I can't do something through my idea and some rules is not right.

I don't think students benefit from the rules because I can't do things my own way and some rules are not right.

'benefit from the morals' 应为 'benefit from the rules','I don't I can't do something through my idea' 语法混乱,改为 'I can't do things my own way' 更通顺。'some rules is not right' 主谓不一致,应为 'some rules are not right'。

Singular and plural issue

× some rules is not right.

some rules are not right.

'rules' 是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are',而不是单数 'is'。

Sentence structure errors

× Who who think that there's 100% rise?

Who thinks that there's a 100% rise?

句子结构错误,重复了 'Who',且主谓不一致,'Who' 单数,谓语动词应为 'thinks'。

Past tense issue

× Yeah, so my teacher did to his job very well and they always take care about the students.

Yeah, so my teacher does his job very well and always takes care of the students.

这里时态应与问题保持一致,使用一般现在时 'does'。'did to his job' 结构错误,应为 'does his job'。'take care about' 应为 'take care of'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yeah, so my teacher did to his job very well and they always take care about the students.

Yeah, so my teacher does his job very well and always takes care of the students.

'my teacher' 是单数,不能用复数代词 'they',应使用单数代词或省略代词。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They always, they always ask our advice or our suggestion and and always give me some.

They always ask for our advice or suggestions and always give me some.

'ask our advice or our suggestion' 应为 'ask for our advice or suggestions','suggestion' 应用复数形式 'suggestions',且去掉重复的 'and'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CloseNear; Dense; Evenly matched; Immediate; Intimate
LightBright; Animate; Flimsy; Nimble; Gentle
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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