Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
In my school, umm middle school and high school, our children need to cut their hair. The girls need to cut their hair like like this and the boy need to cut their hair. It's too short. We don't like this rose, but only.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
I don't think so. Uh, my school said if you have long hair you don't have time to study, you will spend many time to here, but I don't think so.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, my teacher is good every time the other teacher comes my class to text our hair and my teacher will let the long hair grows to bathroom and yeah.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,表达混乱且有语法错误。建议回答时先明确回答问题,然后用简洁的句子具体说明规则,避免重复和不必要的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are rules at my school. For example, students must keep their hair neat and short. Girls and boys have specific hair length requirements to maintain a uniform appearance.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不流畅,缺少具体理由和连贯的逻辑。建议先明确表达观点,然后用具体理由支持,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't think more rules would help students. Because having long hair does not affect study time, and too many rules might make students feel stressed and less motivated.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰,语法错误较多,难以理解。建议先直接回答问题,然后用简洁明了的句子具体描述老师的表现,避免无关内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He is patient and always helps students understand difficult topics clearly.
× The girls need to cut their hair like like this and the boy need to cut their hair.
✓ The girls need to cut their hair like this and the boys need to cut their hair.
这里出现了单复数不一致的问题。'the boy' 应该改为复数形式 'the boys',因为前面提到了 'girls' 是复数,且语境中指的是多个男生。
× It's too short.
✓ It's too short.
此句无明显单复数错误,保持原句。
× We don't like this rose, but only.
✓ We don't like this style, only.
原句中 'rose' 可能是误用,应该是 'style' 或 'look',且 'but only' 结构不完整,改为 'only' 更合适。
× If you have long hair you don't have time to study, you will spend many time to here, but I don't think so.
✓ If you have long hair, you don't have time to study; you will spend a lot of time here, but I don't think so.
'spend many time to here' 中 'many time' 应为 'a lot of time',且 'to here' 用法错误,应该直接用 'here'。
× my teacher will let the long hair grows to bathroom and yeah.
✓ My teacher will let the long hair grow in the bathroom, and yeah.
'the long hair grows' 中 'grows' 应为动词原形 'grow',因为前面有情态动词 'will',后面动词用原形。
× my teacher will let the long hair grows to bathroom and yeah.
✓ My teacher will let the long hair grow in the bathroom, and yeah.
'to bathroom' 应改为 'in the bathroom',表示位置。