Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 만들고, 복수형과 시제 일치를 주의하세요. 예를 들어, 'There were a lot of rules' 대신 'There are many rules'가 더 자연스럽습니다. 또한, 의견을 명확히 표현하고 이유를 덧붙이면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: There are many rules at my school, but the most important one is that students must wear a school uniform at all times. I don't think this rule is very good because it limits personal expression, but the school continues to enforce it.

Gợi ý: 답변이 주제에 직접적으로 답하고 있으나, 문법과 표현이 다소 부자연스럽습니다. 연결어를 사용해 문장을 더 논리적으로 만들고, 구체적인 이유나 예시를 추가하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can benefit students because, just like in society, people need to be responsible for their actions. Therefore, schools should guide students to become better citizens by setting clear rules and expectations.

Gợi ý: 답변이 중복되고 문법적으로 부정확합니다. 문장을 간결하게 만들고, 구체적인 예시를 들어 교사의 장점을 명확히 표현하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, my first English teacher, Dmitri Rusopless, did his job very well. He always listened carefully to me and helped me improve my speaking skills to sound more like a native English speaker.

× I don't think it is quite good rules, but they are keep maintaining this.

✓ I don't think they are quite good rules, but they keep maintaining them.

The phrase 'it is quite good rules' incorrectly uses singular 'it' with plural 'rules'. It should be 'they are quite good rules' to match plural subject and verb. Also, 'they are keep maintaining this' is incorrect; the correct form is 'they keep maintaining them' to use the correct verb form and pronoun for plural 'rules'.

× they are keep maintaining this.

✓ they keep maintaining them.

The phrase 'are keep maintaining' is incorrect because 'keep' should not be preceded by 'are' in this context. The correct form is 'keep maintaining' without 'are'. Also, 'this' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'rules'.

× because like in school, in society people have to be responsible for their action.

✓ because like in school, in society people have to be responsible for their actions.

The word 'action' should be plural 'actions' because 'their' refers to multiple people, so the noun should be plural to agree with the plural possessive pronoun.

× he always listened to listen to my, my words and he always helped me how to speak and use English better, just like foreign people.

✓ he always listened to my words and he always helped me to speak and use English better, just like foreign people.

The phrase 'listened to listen to my, my words' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'listened to my words'. Also, 'helped me how to speak' is incorrect; the correct form is 'helped me to speak' or 'helped me speak'.