Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答内容较为完整，但语言表达不够自然，有些句子结构不够流畅，且部分词汇使用不准确。例如，“electricity devices”应为“electronic devices”，且句子衔接可以更自然。建议多练习使用地道表达和连接词，使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my university. For instance, we are not allowed to use electronic devices in the dormitory or during classes. This helps maintain discipline and shows respect to the teachers.

Gợi ý: 你的回答未完成，且语法错误较多，如“gave establish”应为“establish”，句子结构混乱，影响表达效果。建议注意语法准确性，完成句子表达，并使用连接词使观点更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think more rules can benefit younger students because they help protect them and create a sense of order, which is good for learning. However, for older students like those at university, too many rules might limit their independence.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不自然的问题，如“all day, their job very well”不通顺。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达，并注意逻辑连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher who did her job very well. My junior high English teacher was like a friend to us and treated every student fairly. Because of this, we all liked her a lot.

× During the classes we can't use our phone to show respect to the teacher.

✓ During the classes we can't use our phones to show respect to the teacher.

这里的 'phone' 应该用复数形式，因为指的是学生们各自的手机。根据上下文，复数更合适。

× rules cannot only protect them but also gave establish a sense of order which are both beneficial to their studies.

✓ rules cannot only protect them but also establish a sense of order which is both beneficial to their studies.

这里 'gave establish' 是错误的，应该用动词原形 'establish'，因为前面有情态动词 'cannot'，后面动词应为原形。'are' 应改为 'is'，因为 'a sense of order' 是单数。

× However, I believe for the older students such as university students, they'd better give a.

✓ However, I believe for the older students such as university students, they had better be given more freedom.

原句不完整且结构混乱，'they'd better give a' 没有明确表达意思。应补充完整句子，表达“他们最好被给予更多自由”。

× Yes, and I think all the teachers I met during my studies, all day, their job very well, especially my junior high English teacher.

✓ Yes, and I think all the teachers I met during my studies did their job very well, especially my junior high English teacher.

原句缺少谓语动词，'their job very well' 结构不完整，应加上动词 'did' 来完成句子。

× She was kind of like a friend to us, not a teacher.

✓ She was kind of like a friend to us, not like a teacher.

这里 'not a teacher' 结构不完整，应该用 'not like a teacher' 来表示对比，表达她更像朋友而不是老师。