Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question and provides examples, but there are some grammatical errors and unclear phrases that affect clarity. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, ensure your supporting details are clear and relevant. For example, "We were expected to respect our teachers, which helped create a positive learning environment."

Ví dụ: When I was in school, there were several rules to follow. For instance, we had to wear uniforms every day to promote unity and reduce distractions. Additionally, we were expected to respect our teachers, which helped maintain discipline and a good learning atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes that make it difficult to understand. Focus on forming complete sentences and clearly expressing your opinion. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, "I believe that having more rules can help students develop good manners because they teach important values like respect and responsibility."

Ví dụ: I believe that having more rules can benefit students because they help develop good manners. For example, the rules at my high school taught me important values such as respect and responsibility, which are essential for personal growth.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing due to inconsistent pronouns and unclear sentences. Try to organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use correct pronouns and verb tenses. For example, "I had a math teacher who was very responsible and caring. He always made sure that any student who didn't understand a concept received extra help."

Ví dụ: I had a math teacher who did his job very well. He was very responsible and genuinely cared about his students. If any student didn't understand a concept, he would take extra time to explain it until they fully understood.

× Also, we were expected to create our teachers respectfully that that helped us.

✓ Also, we were expected to treat our teachers respectfully as they helped us.

The phrase 'create our teachers respectfully' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'treat' when referring to behaviour towards people. Also, 'that that helped us' is unclear and should be 'as they helped us' to show reason.

× I think I agree with that rules help but that's develop good manners.

✓ I think I agree that rules help to develop good manners.

The phrase 'I agree with that rules help' is incorrect; it should be 'I agree that rules help'. Also, 'that's develop' is incorrect; it should be 'to develop' to express purpose.

× For example, when I was the rules were which were in my high school taught me important videos like respect and responsibility.

✓ For example, the rules in my high school taught me important values like respect and responsibility.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'When I was the rules were which were in my high school' is incorrect structure. It should be simplified to 'the rules in my high school taught me...'. Also, 'videos' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'values'.

× I'm going to talk about my teachers. He teaches us, he taught us math. He was very responsible teacher and if she thought he thought genuinely from her heart to us, if we if one of his student doesn't understand, didn't understand the concept well, he will live at live.

✓ I'm going to talk about my teacher. He teaches us math. He was a very responsible teacher and he genuinely cared for us. If one of his students didn't understand the concept well, he would live it again.

The original sentences have pronoun confusion ('he' and 'she' mixed), missing articles ('a very responsible teacher'), and unclear phrases ('he will live at live'). The corrected version clarifies pronouns, adds necessary articles, and attempts to interpret the intended meaning about repeating lessons ('he would live it again').