Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và logic hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must return to the dormitory before 10:10 PM, and bringing outside food like fruit is not allowed. These rules help maintain order and discipline among students.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn còn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và cung cấp lý do cụ thể kèm ví dụ. Sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I think students can benefit from having more rules because rules create equality among students. For instance, when everyone follows the same rules, it helps improve social and life skills by encouraging fairness and responsibility.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn còn lặp từ và thiếu chi tiết cụ thể. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp lại từ, và cung cấp ví dụ hoặc mô tả cụ thể về giáo viên đó để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a teacher at my school who does his job very well. He is very responsible and always prepares interesting lessons that help students understand the material better.

× Well in my school have a lot.

✓ Well, my school has a lot.

The original sentence lacks a subject and has incorrect word order. The correct sentence includes the subject 'my school' and the verb 'has' to agree with the singular subject. Adding a comma after 'Well' improves readability.

× I have a several rules such as they can they can go back to dorm and school after 10:10 PM or they can get some fruit into a.

✓ I have several rules such as they can go back to the dorm and school after 10:10 PM or they can get some fruit.

The phrase 'a several rules' is incorrect; 'several' does not need an article 'a'. Also, 'go back to dorm and school' needs the definite article 'the' before 'dorm'. The repeated phrase 'they can' is redundant and should be removed. The phrase 'get some fruit into a' is incomplete and unclear, so it is corrected to 'get some fruit'.

× What are some case students will have a few advantage from the rules because they can equally the student to that student and have some kind of equality and also improve their social skill and life skill.

✓ In some cases, students will have a few advantages from the rules because they can treat students equally and have some kind of equality, and also improve their social skills and life skills.

The phrase 'What are some case' is incorrect; it should be 'In some cases'. 'A few advantage' should be plural 'a few advantages'. 'They can equally the student to that student' is incorrect; it should be 'they can treat students equally'. 'Social skill and life skill' should be plural 'social skills and life skills'.

× Well, some teacher around of me and in my school, uh, do do their job very well and they do with their responsibility to teach our, our students.

✓ Well, some teachers around me and in my school do their job very well and they take their responsibility to teach our students seriously.

'Some teacher' should be plural 'some teachers'. The phrase 'around of me' is incorrect; it should be 'around me'. The repeated 'do do' is a mistake and should be 'do'. 'They do with their responsibility' is incorrect; it should be 'they take their responsibility'. The repeated 'our' is unnecessary.