Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
In general, in many schools there are too many rules and in my school there is one of the most important rules. For example, firstly, students do not miss lessons and do not late on lesson. Moreover, they.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think they would benefit more from more rules. When they follow some rules in the classroom, they are more respected and respectful among classmates and teachers as well. Yeah.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, uh, I had, uh, a teacher and not only one teacher, uh, they.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და სრულყოფილი. გამოიყენეთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები, რათა პასუხი იყოს ლოგიკური და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი. ასევე, შეეცადეთ გამოიყენოთ კონკრეტული მაგალითები და დაასრულოთ წინადადებები სრულად.
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several important rules at my school. For example, students must attend all lessons and arrive on time. Additionally, they are expected to respect their teachers and classmates to maintain a positive learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ორგანიზებული და ბუნებრივი. გამოიყენეთ დაკავშირებული სიტყვები, რათა გაამყაროთ თქვენი აზრი და მოიყვანოთ კონკრეტული მიზეზები ან მაგალითები.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help maintain discipline. For instance, when students follow rules, they create a respectful atmosphere that improves learning for everyone.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: თქვენი პასუხი ძალიან არასრულყოფილია და ბუნდოვანია. შეეცადეთ პასუხი იყოს სრულყოფილი, პირდაპირი და კონკრეტული. მოიყვანეთ მაგალითები და გამოიყენეთ ნაკლები შეჩერება და სიტყვები, როგორიცაა "uh".
Ví dụ: Yes, I have had several teachers who did their jobs very well. For example, my English teacher always prepared interesting lessons and helped students understand difficult topics clearly.
× In general, in many schools there are too many rules and in my school there is one of the most important rules.
✓ In general, in many schools there are too many rules and in my school there is one of the most important rules.
The phrase 'one of the most important rules' is correct because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun 'rules'. No correction needed here.
× students do not miss lessons and do not late on lesson.
✓ students do not miss lessons and are not late for lessons.
The verb 'late' is an adjective and requires a form of 'to be' (are) before it. Also, the correct preposition is 'for' not 'on' when referring to being late for a lesson. Additionally, 'lesson' should be plural to match 'lessons'.
× Moreover, they.
✓ Moreover, they follow the rules carefully.
The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb and object. It should be completed to convey a full idea.
× When they follow some rules in the classroom, they are more respected and respectful among classmates and teachers as well.
✓ When they follow some rules in the classroom, they are more respected and respectful towards classmates and teachers as well.
The preposition 'among' is used for groups, but 'towards' is more appropriate when describing respectful behavior directed at individuals or groups.
× Uh, yes, uh, I had, uh, a teacher and not only one teacher, uh, they.
✓ Uh, yes, I have had a teacher, actually more than one, who does his or her job very well.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs to be restructured to form a complete and coherent sentence.