Rules— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct response, then add specific examples using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors. For example, mention punctuality and dress code clearly and explain why these rules exist.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For instance, students must be punctual and wear clean, ironed uniforms. Additionally, personal grooming like neat hair and trimmed nails is required to maintain discipline.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many hesitations. Try to express your opinion directly and support it with reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I believe that having more rules does not always benefit students. However, existing rules help students develop self-discipline and encourage self-reflection, which are important for their personal growth.

Gợi ý: Your answer is positive but needs better structure and clearer expression. Start with a direct statement, then explain with specific examples using linking words. Also, correct grammar and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, many of my teachers perform their jobs very well. They not only teach academic subjects but also provide life lessons and advice, which help us in our personal development.

× Yes, at my school a student have to follow many rules like regarding timing, they should be punctual regarding clothes they should wear.

✓ Yes, at my school a student has to follow many rules like regarding timing, they should be punctual regarding clothes they should wear.

The subject 'a student' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I iron iron clothes without any stain with hair, nails and all the obedience they should follow.

✓ I iron clothes without any stains, and they should keep their hair and nails clean and follow all the rules.

The sentence is unclear and uses 'iron iron clothes' redundantly. Also, 'obedience' is incorrectly used here. The correction clarifies the meaning and uses appropriate adjectives and nouns.

× Yes, at my school a student have to follow many rules like regarding timing, they should be punctual regarding clothes they should wear.

✓ Yes, at my school a student has to follow many rules, such as being punctual regarding timing and wearing appropriate clothes.

The modal verb 'have to' is correct but the sentence structure is awkward. Rephrasing improves clarity and proper modal verb usage.

× It's not like more rules can give more benefit to the students, but yes, definitely, uh, the rules help them to, uh, get the self obedience or you can say key, uh, self, uh, analysis.

✓ It's not that more rules can give more benefits to the students, but yes, definitely, the rules help them develop self-discipline or, you can say, self-analysis.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. Correcting sentence structure and word choice improves clarity and meaning.

× They, they can, uh, be, uh, self analyze themselves and uh, they.

✓ They can analyze themselves and improve.

The phrase 'self analyze themselves' is incorrect; 'analyze themselves' suffices. Removing filler words and correcting word form improves clarity.

× Yes, I think most of most of my teachers do very good jobs in a better way, because they taught us, not only taught us about subject but also about life.

✓ Yes, I think most of my teachers do their jobs very well because they teach us not only about subjects but also about life.

'Do very good jobs in a better way' is awkward; 'do their jobs very well' is correct. Also, 'taught' should be 'teach' to match present tense. 'Subject' should be plural 'subjects'.

× Yes, I think most of most of my teachers do very good jobs in a better way, because they taught us, not only taught us about subject but also about life.

✓ Yes, I think most of my teachers do their jobs very well because they teach us not only about subjects but also about life.

The verb 'taught' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'teach' to indicate ongoing action.

× Give us advices, train us for self development self.

✓ They give us advice and train us for self-development.

'Advices' is incorrect as 'advice' is an uncountable noun. Also, the phrase 'self development self' is redundant and unclear; corrected to 'self-development'.