Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are a lot of roles in our school such as you can't speak in classroom and you can't eat or drink when the teachers are speaking. I think the rules is around us and help us.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think these rules is benefit for us. If everyone can comply with the rules, we can have a good environment for our studying.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a English teacher do that do her job very well. She is very careful person, she can confuse our thoughts and tell us how to correct it and we all love her.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“roles”应为“rules”,“rules is”应为“rules are”。此外,表达不够自然,且细节不够具体。建议注意语法一致性,使用更自然的表达,并提供更具体的规则例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students are not allowed to speak during lessons and must not eat or drink when teachers are talking. These rules help maintain order and create a good learning environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误明显,如“rules is benefit”应为“rules are beneficial”。表达较为简单,缺少连接词和具体细节。建议改进语法,使用连接词使句子更连贯,并举例说明规则如何带来好处。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe having more rules can benefit students. For instance, if everyone follows the rules, it can reduce distractions and help create a quiet and focused environment for studying.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“a English teacher”应为“an English teacher”,“do that do her job”表达不清晰。内容表达不够自然且含糊。建议加强语法练习,使用更准确的词汇和句式,并具体说明老师的优点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have an English teacher who does her job very well. She is very attentive and always helps us understand difficult concepts clearly. Because of her patience and dedication, we all really like her.
× Yes, there are a lot of roles in our school such as you can't speak in classroom and you can't eat or drink when the teachers are speaking.
✓ Yes, there are a lot of rules in our school such as you can't speak in the classroom and you can't eat or drink when the teachers are speaking.
这里的 'roles' 应为 'rules',因为题目问的是学校的规章制度,'rules' 才是正确的单词。'roles' 意为角色,与语境不符。
× Yes, there are a lot of roles in our school such as you can't speak in classroom and you can't eat or drink when the teachers are speaking.
✓ Yes, there are a lot of rules in our school such as you can't speak in the classroom and you can't eat or drink when the teachers are speaking.
'in classroom' 应该加上定冠词 'the',变成 'in the classroom',因为这里指的是特定的教室。
× I think the rules is around us and help us.
✓ I think the rules are around us and help us.
主语 'rules' 是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are',而不是单数 'is'。
× Yes, I think these rules is benefit for us.
✓ Yes, I think these rules are beneficial for us.
主语 'rules' 是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。另外,'benefit' 应改为形容词 'beneficial',表示“有益的”。
× If everyone can comply with the rules, we can have a good environment for our studying.
✓ If everyone can comply with the rules, we can have a good environment for our studies.
'for our studying' 不太自然,通常用复数名词 'studies' 表示学习活动。
× Yes, I have a English teacher do that do her job very well.
✓ Yes, I have an English teacher who does her job very well.
'a English teacher' 前应使用 'an' 因为 'English' 以元音音素开头。句子缺少关系代词 'who',且动词 'do' 应为第三人称单数 'does'。
× Yes, I have a English teacher do that do her job very well.
✓ Yes, I have an English teacher who does her job very well.
主语是第三人称单数 'teacher',谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'does'。
× She is very careful person, she can confuse our thoughts and tell us how to correct it and we all love her.
✓ She is a very careful person, she can clarify our thoughts and tell us how to correct them, and we all love her.
'confuse our thoughts' 意思不清,应改为 'clarify our thoughts'。'correct it' 中的 'it' 指代不明,应改为复数 'them' 指代 'thoughts'。此外,'very careful person' 前应加不定冠词 'a'。