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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Actually, I'm a civil engineer, so I have graduated from school for many years. As I remember correctly, when I was a kid, there were many rules in my school.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I do think so. Following rules is essential for everyone. So when kids are in the school, they learn how to follow rules. They know it is necessary to follow rules.

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Thí sinh

Yes, I do have an English teacher. When I was in the high school, she was very patient and encouraged me a lot, so my English skill improved a lot at that time.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答没有直接回答问题,且内容偏离主题。建议直接回答学校是否有规则,并简要描述规则的类型或重要性,避免无关信息。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many rules at my school, such as wearing uniforms and being punctual. These rules help maintain order and discipline among students.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为重复,缺乏具体细节和例子。建议使用连接词丰富内容,提供具体原因或例子来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe students benefit from more rules because it teaches them discipline and responsibility. For example, having rules about homework submission helps students develop good study habits.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以增加更多细节,如老师具体如何帮助你,使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had an English teacher in high school who was very patient and encouraging. She provided extra practice materials and gave constructive feedback, which greatly improved my English skills.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Actually, I'm a civil engineer, so I have graduated from school for many years.

Actually, I'm a civil engineer, and I graduated from school many years ago.

这里使用了现在完成时态(have graduated),但句子中提到的时间是明确的过去(many years ago),应使用一般过去时(graduated)。此外,'for many years'通常用于表示持续的时间段,而这里更合适用'many years ago'表示过去的时间点。

Article errors

× When I was in the high school, she was very patient and encouraged me a lot, so my English skill improved a lot at that time.

When I was in high school, she was very patient and encouraged me a lot, so my English skills improved a lot at that time.

'high school'前不需要定冠词'the',因为这里指的是一般的学校阶段。'English skill'应为复数形式'skills',因为英语能力通常包含多个方面。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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