Part 1
Giám khảo
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Thí sinh
Uh, I'm a university student. My university have a lot of rules about us. UH, for example, uh student, uh student cannot join, cannot drink in school.
Giám khảo
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think, uh, because many rules exist to preserve our environment, to study more comfortable. So many rules has their own meaning, so I think.
Giám khảo
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have my Korean teacher Miss Moon teach us not only Korean accent or. Vocabulary feedback but also to make make us more comfortable person.
Are there any rules for students at your school?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答は文法的に誤りがあり、流暢さに欠けます。例えば、"My university have"は"My university has"が正しいです。また、"student cannot join, cannot drink in school"は意味が不明瞭で、具体的に何が禁止されているのか明確に述べる必要があります。回答は簡潔で自然な英語を心がけ、文法の正確さと明確な表現を意識しましょう。
Ví dụ: I am a university student, and there are many rules we must follow. For example, students are not allowed to drink alcohol on campus to maintain a safe environment.
Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答は内容がやや曖昧で、文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、"to study more comfortable"は"to study more comfortably"が正しいです。また、理由を述べる際に具体的な例や詳細を加えると説得力が増します。接続詞を使って論理的に話を展開することも意識しましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe more rules can help students because they protect the environment and create a comfortable study atmosphere. For instance, rules about noise levels help us concentrate better in the library.
Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答は文法的に不完全で、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、"Miss Moon teach us"は"Miss Moon teaches us"が正しいです。また、"to make make us more comfortable person"は意味が不明瞭なので、具体的にどのようにサポートしているのか明確に述べましょう。回答は簡潔で明確な文を心がけてください。
Ví dụ: Yes, my Korean teacher, Miss Moon, does an excellent job. She not only helps us improve our pronunciation and vocabulary but also creates a comfortable and supportive learning environment.
× My university have a lot of rules about us.
✓ My university has a lot of rules about us.
The subject 'university' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× uh student cannot join, cannot drink in school.
✓ Students cannot join or drink in school.
The modal verb 'cannot' is correctly used, but the sentence lacks plural form for 'student' and proper conjunction 'or' to connect the prohibitions. Also, 'student' should be plural to match the general statement.
× So many rules has their own meaning, so I think.
✓ So many rules have their own meaning, so I think.
The subject 'rules' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× Yes, I have my Korean teacher Miss Moon teach us not only Korean accent or. Vocabulary feedback but also to make make us more comfortable person.
✓ Yes, I have my Korean teacher Miss Moon who teaches us not only Korean accent and vocabulary feedback but also helps us become more comfortable people.
The original sentence has sentence structure errors including missing relative pronoun 'who', incorrect verb form 'teach' instead of 'teaches', incorrect conjunction 'or' instead of 'and', repeated word 'make', and awkward phrasing 'more comfortable person' which should be plural 'people'.