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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Thí sinh

Yes, my goods had several several rules, especially the students have to wear uniform when they go to school.

Giám khảo

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Thí sinh

Actually, I think students would benefit from having more roots because clear guidelines help them stay focused on their study. For example, rules about attendance and homework encourage students to be more responsible.

Giám khảo

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Thí sinh

Definitely. I have a teacher who dare herself exceptionally well. She helped me enrol in my language course and provide continuous support throughout my study.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are there any rules for students at your school?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'my goods' thay vì 'my school' và lặp từ 'several several'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi lặp từ, đồng thời trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với cấu trúc rõ ràng.

Ví dụ: Yes, my school has several rules. For example, students must wear uniforms when they come to school.

Do you think students would benefit more from more rules?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với ví dụ cụ thể, nhưng có lỗi chính tả 'roots' thay vì 'rules' và câu trả lời có thể được làm mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để kết nối các ý. Hãy chú ý chính tả và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Ví dụ: Actually, I think students would benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help them stay focused on their studies. For instance, rules about attendance and homework encourage students to be more responsible.

Do you have a teacher who does his or her job very well?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'dare herself' nên là 'does her job'. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: Definitely. I have a teacher who does her job exceptionally well. She helped me enroll in my language course and has provided continuous support throughout my studies.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, my goods had several several rules, especially the students have to wear uniform when they go to school.

Yes, my school has several rules, especially that students have to wear uniforms when they go to school.

The word 'goods' is incorrect here; it should be 'school' to refer to the place. 'Had' should be 'has' to match the present tense. 'Several several' is a repetition error. 'Uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the clothing worn by multiple students.

Verb in the present participle form

× Actually, I think students would benefit from having more roots because clear guidelines help them stay focused on their study.

Actually, I think students would benefit from having more rules because clear guidelines help them stay focused on their studies.

The word 'roots' is a typo and should be 'rules'. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to the general academic work of students.

Third person singular issue

× She helped me enrol in my language course and provide continuous support throughout my study.

She helped me enrol in my language course and provided continuous support throughout my studies.

The verb 'provide' should be in past tense 'provided' to match 'helped'. Also, 'study' should be plural 'studies' to refer to academic work in general.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I have a teacher who dare herself exceptionally well.

I have a teacher who carries herself exceptionally well.

The verb 'dare' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'carries herself' to mean how she behaves or conducts herself. 'Herself' is correctly used as a reflexive pronoun.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ClearUnderstandable; Obvious; Transparent; Bright; Unobstructed
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